Reviews for Progression
Sokka-Mushroom chapter 1 . 2/26
Haha I really enjoyed the hospital bit! I always imagined Risa and Atsu to doubt the idea of pregnancy but picturing the doctor's confused expression was priceless! Good job good job! :D
sakurakialisa chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
I've always wondered what their married life would be like. I think this captures it pretty well
Mythika chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
I like them like this XD
and I think you did perfect with their characters! :DD
eben though I can't imagine otani reacting like this to the news XD
cruciomysoul chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
Ah! This is the first Lovely Complex fic I've read and I absolutely adored this one-shot! Soo cute how not even that would change them completely xD
Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
hehehe even in marriage they"re fighting heh
asexual anoyance chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
not ooc. defiantly and accurate portrayal of their comic-lovey-dovey insanity that we love them for
BlackCatNeko999 chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Great job with this story!
Very good so please write more ;)
Fobia chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
I don0t think it was OOC, I can totally imagine Otani being all over-protector over risa and the baby n.n Beautifull written, too bad it's just a one-shot u.u
BronyBerry0 chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
Q-Q So. CUTE. I can't get enough of these kind of mushy stories.. please post more! I'll be your best friend!
Koizumi-Marichan chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
No me gustó, me encantó! hahahahah xD está excelente... me encantó la forma en que mantuviste a los personajes como realmente son pero mas crecidos :D ! no todo pueden conseguir esa mezcla... bastante bueno :)
DestinyDreamer911 chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Cute!
venaly chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
aw..so touching .. T-T *sniff..sniff*

i've read this a thousand times...coz i like this story..you're GREAT! God Bless! :D
koishii chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
so cute!luvd it!
it's simply me chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
I think it's quite a believable way for them to grow up. It was a cute, nice little story :)
Priincezz chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
I loved it! So so lovely! And... well, it wasn't OoC at all. I mean, I could perfectly imagine them that way in a future :D It was great! Keep it like this! Your writing is great! :D
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