|Reviews for Schizophasia|
| 20thPilot chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
I have schizophrenia and it is indeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed a lot like this. personally i don't mind sitting in a chair to up to five hours staring outside but uhhhh apparently people aren't supposed to do that 'normallllly'
Loves you story, awesome idea and such. tata
| Funky Bracelet Chick chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
I like the the little bit of Canada and England's perspectives at the end. Very interesting.
| wisecurledqueen chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
I... woah. This really made me think, and I love fics that do that. What I thought was perfect was the bold and italics, and how they were in place. Thanks so much!
| Laughing Rain chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Frighteningly accurate. I can see the character being that way... This was pretty out-there, but it certainly got the point across.
| yingyingyang chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
That was... very different. I had to re-read it several times (more than several, really. Like, ten?) in order to try to get the different views and such that Alfred was experiencing.
Really, really cool. I have to wonder though, why you don't have a comma after sometimes in "Sometimes America will sit for hours..." but you have one after the sometimes in "Sometimes, Matthew wonders with a frown..." Something really small that was bothering me.
I like it~ Thank you for writing!
| Carcharias chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Very interesting and thought-provoking for such a short bit. I'm quite impressed with the schizophasia aspect, it really conveys the boiling chaos that is the American political system. :)
| Aigle chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Huh. VERY awesome.
I like this! I don't think I've ever read any other fics of this style.
| Pink Sugar Elephant chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
I loved it :D Its very avant-garde but experimental stuff wins x3