Reviews for Tonight Giotto
dhyetaX1999 chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
I think I have read this story as an omake in "omake no kobayashi-kun"
It was the same. You have plagiarized it.
Battle-Royalist chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
Cool fic
gracefulsunshine chapter 1 . 6/23/2010
It's good, except for the grammatical errors (sp? IDK). Using Shakespeare throughout the story was kinda interesting.
mafiaqueen1 chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
It has a nice plot, though there were a lot of grammatical errors. This, unfortunately, gave me quite a headache while reading. I suggest you ask a beta reader to check your work over next time, ad if you do, how about considering changing beta readers or ask another one for a second opinion. This may seem like a handful, but a true author can wait for their masterpiece to surface. Please do not take this the wrong way, you have skill. I am merely commenting as one author to another.
Hibari Kyouya chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
Kya!Fumi this is amazing!

Even thought I don't really know all shakespeare stories and poetry.

But it's cool!

Keep on writing!
DarkChocoBerryLover chapter 1 . 10/15/2009

I never read shakespeare so I don't know how's the story... But it's really awesome~~

Although I love Tsuna and Mukuro pairing the most w


Keep on writing xDD
Apple of Doom chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Oh mai, so adorable 3

And no, this is no suck, just a few grammar and vocab mistakes, but the story ìs good, nonetheless~

Keep on writing~