Reviews for Lost Soul
cztelnik chapter 1 . 9/8
Very interesting, hope this moves on someday.
Numbet1ebaystoregmail chapter 1 . 7/26
Really good
Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 1 . 7/26
Okay, aside from HP's rather weird personality shift, it's good enough... up until the very puzzling last bit, when a character or two pops up without any background.
Bearmauls chapter 1 . 12/6/2016
Gah! Why is this marked complete? I want to read an entire series about this! :)
Kirosha chapter 1 . 6/2/2016
You know, I am still waiting for you to pick this up. Here is to hoping.
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
i suppose that could be a bit tricky to find, its a shame that this wasnt continued
LoganAlexander chapter 1 . 11/6/2015
Ha...can't apparate, bullshit.
CMVreud chapter 1 . 12/20/2014
One hell of an intro. XD
Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
No fair! way too good to end like that. This is awesome!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2014
This was done surprisingly well. The characters are multidimensional and interesting.
Fullmetal11791 chapter 1 . 2/25/2014
Well, the first half of the chapter was clearly rushed, somewhat disorganized as you tried to fit in *every* small bit if Dresden information in that you could. Wasn't really relevant, and was sort of boring. The second half with Pottwe was much more interesting, much better written, and seemed like a different story altogether. Somewhat criminal to list this as complete when it's clearly written as the first chapter to a bigger story. Wish you would continue this.
Jennixst chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
Damn.. well written and a good plot bunny. Here is hoping it continues to show promise if you plan to keep writing of course.
leilanifire chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
Dresden is stronger than Potter. Much stronger. While Potter is like a bonfire, Dresden is the Chicago fire. You know, the one that completely destroyed about half the city in the 1800s?
Celexs Draconia chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
I was totally hoping that this was a multi chapter. It was just getting interesting too. I would very much enjoy seeing more of this.

lazyguy90 chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
Great work on this.
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