Reviews for A Father's Pride
Rosepetal987 chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
-*Giggles* Mawhaha, another mind that thinks like mine~!-

Vexen, and complements. I can understand mistaking Vexen as a women-since he is such a girl-but Repliku too? He would /kill/ someone for that...

Vexen is a /quack/ but he's a slightly lovable quack... damn fangirl meets RPest brain~!

Ahh, and the poke at Namine was put in, yes! Now, now, there was something more, but I think my mind wandered off again, and, and. Vexen is just not /good/ outside his lab, and Repliku, well Repliku is almost as antisocial as the real Riku, which is very... 3 I liked it~! 3 ~Mar
Beatrisu chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
You've got a pretty good writing style. It's refreshing to see good writers here at . There are a few, but it takes a while to find the pearls.

I enjoyed the humor, and Vexen's mental breakdown. I liked the entire story, to be quite fair :) Very well executed.
xSoulxEaterx chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
Oh gosh. XD This made me laugh. I can totally see Vexen doing that. Poor little Repliku! XD Hahaha. This was such a funny story. XD Good job!
SesshyLover-cha chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
The sad thing is, I can see Vexen as an obsessive compulsive father. XD

UPDATE SOON...!
becoafamu chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
oh. my god. ohmygod. oh my god.

i started losing it at "oh- he doesn't _have_ a mother" and kept going from there. i can totally see vexen making strangers uncomfortable in public. and YES on the nod to repliku/namine! yes please.

nice job :)