Reviews for The Eyemote
Pams chapter 7 . 1/26
continue the story! Read your story this year of 2018 and pity you're not finished. I hope you can read this review ...
XxRemus John LupinxX chapter 7 . 12/9/2013
I love this dirty dirty story but i'd love to have longer chapters to read
Europe28 chapter 6 . 9/21/2012
...I wish there was more of this pairing...
nurdgurl714 chapter 7 . 7/24/2011
That was hot, hot, and hotter than HOT! Love Cromwell, he's my favorite of all the characters! I can feel his torment, and I always thought of him as Henry's bitch! You should update, doesn't seem like it's finished.
G chapter 7 . 7/1/2011
Nice job with the emotions. I think I would find it hard to write a scene like this, but you did well
G chapter 6 . 7/1/2011
I love how most of these could work as oneshots.
G chapter 5 . 7/1/2011
Quite... sensual

I bet I know what will happen next chapter...
G chapter 4 . 7/1/2011
A rating change - hmmm, it's not too hard to guess what will happen. BTW, I liked the phrase "He appeared to be drowning in the white papers" or something like that
G chapter 3 . 7/1/2011
Ooooh, cliffhanger!
G chapter 2 . 7/1/2011
I really like how this centered around hate and anger. Henry sure did get mad! I also remember hearing somewhere that hate is on the border of love
G chapter 1 . 7/1/2011
Nice opening scene! I'm hoping that Season 3 of the Tudors may make me more sympathetic to Thomas Cromwell, but for now...
SKC83 chapter 7 . 2/17/2011
Oh *my* this story is just so dark and delicious; words cannot describe how satisfying it is that you've penned out the very scenario that I myself have mentally "tacked on" to the various "rough" scenes between the king and the dear Cromwell ;)

I can't help but notice however, that this story has not been updated for almost a year despite a reassurance that a new chapter would be following "in a few days." I am a recent university graduate myself so I understand how the workload can be all consuming, not to mention the "busyness" that follows graduation and I've (ashamed to say) left a few stories unfinished myself. Despite this, I dare to ask if there is any chance of this one being continued? (Not to mention "Trick of the Light" which is also *amazing*) It's just that there are so few stories out there of this calibre that it would be a real shame not to see it completed.
Nehan Shinzui34 chapter 7 . 9/19/2010
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE?/!
Anonymous chapter 7 . 8/2/2010
Please continue! I fell in love with this pairing because of you!
Brandy chapter 7 . 5/17/2010
This chapter was totally hot. I loved it. I was, however, a little confused towards the end about the mechanics. Is Henry taking Cromwell from the back or front? Did he turn him around somewhere in the last paragraph? Totally love the story. Just got a little lost in the last paragraph...
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