|Reviews for The Longest Summer|
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/7
| KingIchi chapter 6 . 5/22
Act like a slut to make guy you like jealous... Get mad when guy calls you a slut...
Common women behavior. And of course Edward defends her, 'he's being a asshole for no reason' even tho she obviously said she wanted to making him jealous...
How the fuck does Bella think Jealousy is shown? It's easy to come off as angry.
| LolaTheSa chapter 31 . 4/18
I'm sorry but Bella's love lines lose their meaning and the weight behind them seeing she left him to go screw around.
It makes it even more bitter cause you have Edward not at all wary about that or judge her for it... or question her words of love to him. She loved him for so long yet left him to 'shop around'. And actually did it, that's suppose to be love? On top of that, she didn't contact him, yet says she missed everything about him... See the contradiction?
We're suppose to just accept this as it is? Good thing you wrote a fantastic story up until the point cause if this had happen earlier in the fic, I would not have continued reading.
It just would have been nice to see Edward be a little mean to her... That would have completely settled me, instead, he was just this sad accepting person with no fight in him.
| TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 30 . 2/24
I will keep this as the storie's end.
The outtakes ruin Bella's love. So they will never be true for me.
| lemonangeljuice chapter 32 . 10/18/2018
Thank you, thank you, thank you...for the hea!
I was afraid after your comments at the last chapter that the epi would NOT be the HEA we all wish for our E&B (even though RL rarely happens that way). I’m happy you can continue a friendship with your E. Thanks!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2018
I like this story, although I must admit the nickname LB feels a little forced.
| x AnneCullen x chapter 32 . 6/25/2018
This was such a wonderful story and beautifully written. I truly enjoyed reading it.
| Kesme chapter 32 . 5/23/2018
Lmao Bella is such a spaz xP
| femi chapter 6 . 12/3/2017
stranger grabbing ur tits? And u said its not being a slut...sorry but from my society there are some social norms to comply with,do no let any random person grabs ur tits either is joke or not...if i was edward i would be even b more angry,first with emment,den with jake..even i will not being saying it out loud,my perceptin abt bella will change,slut got dat right
| Anonymous chapter 6 . 11/4/2017
Um, Edward thinks Bella is a slut because Bella was acting like one.. putting Jakes hands over her boobs? Not getting mad the first time and not doing anything serious to stop it? I’d be completely grossed out my Bella if I was Edward and that would have made me uninterested. Just, ew. Not reading this anymore. Based on some of the reviews I’m glad I didn’t waste my time.
| agoldenthrone chapter 3 . 10/29/2016
I know this was written years ago now, but as a girl who's had many camp crushes on staff as a camper and staff here in Australia, and recently spent time in Canada being head of creative arts at a summer camp, I've never loved a story so much when I'm barely in. So many situations are familiar to me, settings, relationships and all, so thank you for helping me with my homesickness for a time and place that I won't get to experience for another 8 months.
| Payton79 chapter 32 . 6/5/2016
I really enjoyed reading this story. But I have to admit my heart broke when I read the outtake where I had to find out they broke up and Bella even was with other people. I know it's the way life goes and I'm really glad she found out Edward was what she really wanted, but still, I hurt badly for him.
Thank for writing and sharing.
| petmom1213 chapter 32 . 4/30/2016
| petmom1213 chapter 30 . 4/30/2016
Thank you so much for writing. This is a really cute story.
| petmom1213 chapter 13 . 4/28/2016
I'm glad I'm reading this so long after it was written. I'm assuming it's complete. I think I checked. lol