The ring falling in the Lake was a sign, a sign that Edward was fucking up his life by marrying Bella-whore

Definitely, the dirty white prostitute Bella

White prostitute Bella was on love with him yet broke up with him and she was busy fucking around, fucking dirty white trash

Jake should go fuck himself like this writer

Fucking prostitute doesn't get the man so she has her harem if assholes led by Jake and Jasper with the cunt Tanya to roughhouse him so he is forced to engage with the prostitute Bella. Fucking dirty white trash at its best

I loved this story so much and I loved this Edward and Bella. Thank you for writing and sharing this with me. Regards Toni

HE SAID THE "L" WORD! I KNOW IT DID NOT SLIP BY BELLA.

GAHHH!

One of the things I LOVE about your story is the switching of POVs. I don't care if I'm never in suspense on what the other character is doing or thinking. Psh! Give me the deets.

And just so you know, as stated before, I love how you write and your storytelling skills. It takes a lot to get me glued to a story. I'm not a snob, but I do recognize greatness, and won't settle for less.

Also, also, I am soooo in love with all your characters. You write them with flaws, keep them real, and very likeable - even Emily! Which, I appreciate her taking an L and not becoming the annoying ex that is used to put a wedge between the couple.

Much love!

This story has always been a favorite of mine and I'm re-reading it, and I still love it so much. But can I tell you what really got to me? The last sentence: PS - Countdown to New Moon...one week!

Gahhh. God, I miss this time so much. We were all so excited and innocent. Things suck so hard core these days. Can we just go back and stay there?

Anyway, such a great fic with superb storytelling and writing.

the Newsie insult makes my theater kid heart happy

"so Edward told you?" BRO I'M CRYING THAT'S SO GOOD

Some of these comments do not pass the vibe check. Newsflash, people: a girl can do whatever she wants and it never justifies slut-shaming. I almost didn't read this because of those comments, but now I realize it's just the readers being rude, not the author. Clearly everyone at camp understands that basic concept, now grasp it yourselves.

potential readers stalking the comments: get into it, it's fun.

What a lovely story! Thank you for sharing. I loved reading it.

I think this was the second fanfic I ever read on this site in 2010. Wow 10 years. Looking forward to reread x

Your amazinggggggggg

Act like a slut to make guy you like jealous... Get mad when guy calls you a slut...

Common women behavior. And of course Edward defends her, 'he's being a asshole for no reason' even tho she obviously said she wanted to making him jealous...

How the fuck does Bella think Jealousy is shown? It's easy to come off as angry.