Reviews for The Longest Summer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story was priceless. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I started reading this a long time ago when you where actually still posting it and I finally came back to finish it. I have no idea why I never finished earlier but better late than never. I love every chapter. It made me laugh and cry which makes the best fics. Any way, well done on this one, it was wonderful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() IM FUCKING CRYING. ACTUAL TEARS ARE COMING OUT. |
![]() ![]() I know I'm kinda late in responding but AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH |
![]() ![]() Cedric diggory? Classic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you so much for sharing such a personal story! I loved every word! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww... E & B's speeches were so cute! And the proposal? Shit that was awesome, and absolutely perfect for them! Glad they got their happy ending! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this story, I did. I just have a hard time understanding why it's always the guy who is given a hard time about his mistakes, but when the girl makes mistakes it's all fine and dandy and we should all just forgive.. I understand that what Edward did here was really crappy, and she has a right to be angry. But when she made a mistake Edward didn't even get upset, and I'm sorry, but I don't see how what he did was so much worse than what she did? He gave her the benefit of the doubt, and he listened to her when she explained. Yet throughout this entire story she has done nothing but jump to conclusions, and not given him a chance to explain before she started berating him and yelling. I loved your Edward! I though he was awesome and sweet. Sure he made mistakes, but nothing too bad in my eyes. And we all make 'em anyway. He was in a dark place, and didn't know how to deal with things, but eventually with a little help, he pulled himself up and did better. Your Bella however, I thought was kind of immature. Yes she was "only" 18, but I still thought she was immature for her age. And I'm only two years older than that. I hated Jake. Don't know why but he just pissed me the fuck off. Maybe because he claimed to be E's best friend, but really he never looked out for him and his feelings. In the beginning it was all about Seth, and then it was all about Bella. The only redeeming thing he did was buy Edward the new bedding. Liked your Tanya though! Except when she told Jake to hit E. The whole violence thing I really didn't like. I thought it was horrible. No offence, I mean we all see things differently but... I just can't condone the use of violence when people make mistakes. I mean slap a guy that's fine. But sending somebody to f*ing hit him, and giving him a concussion? People can f*ing die from a concussion. I can accept a punch if somebody REALLY deserves it. I don't think Edward did. But that's just my opinion. I can understand why some people think he did deserve it however. But when he was already injured, and then Jake kept hitting him after he was blacked out? WTF! That's kind of a sick thing to do to your best friend. And I can't believe they were all just like "oh well, you deserved it". Sorry I just can't see how that would ever be okay... Concussions are never funny. |
![]() ![]() Halfway through the story and they still haven't even gone out for a date. Your characters are seriously so immature. And stupid, how can they not know about their feelings? I'm skipping a lot of the text which I don't usually do bc it's just so boring. |
![]() ![]() I think I lost all respect for Bella after she threw herself on Seth. Feel sorry for him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm happy he apologized. And as I said before, he clearly likes her. All that jealousy and anger and childish man behavior certainly wasn't for nothing. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh, Emily seems so ditzy. Hopefully she won't be a problem all summer. And hopefully Seth won't either. Lol. I have such a hard time picturing that pairing, just cause in the books they had the age difference. Edward has to come around sometime. He's clearly got some feelings developing for Bella. Especially when she shows up in that white t-shirt. Hehe. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I decided this was the perfect read to kick-off summer. And all I can think of now is the counselor I crushed on at camp. ;) Movie night, eh? This should be interesting. And Edward and Emmett, man, they're like about to have a cock fight or something. Lol. Testosterone party. He totally doesn't see her as a child. I can't wait for her to figure that out. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Couldn't stop reading, so many memories about camp floating back to me! Thank you. |
![]() ![]() Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story! :) |