Reviews for His
lulubram chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Need a whole story bout this !
Cookie-the-Rookie chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
Disturbing, yet addicting...
flame69 chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
Tell me there is a sequel, because i loved this story so much! :)
Pyrite chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Love it! You should write a sequel.
Forever777 chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Please write a sequel!
Evil E. Evil chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
I hope you make a sequel because this story is very enjoyable
Shiraka Kay chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
wow

you should turn this into a story
Angelchan2012 chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
*nosebleeds while smirking* you could totally tell John wanted HB to screw him...AWESOME story!
Shifter11 chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
This was an awesome story. I loved it! Very weird i will say but very awesome!
mimifoxlove chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
yo

WOW! I wish this was a full story! you should write a sequel!

-Mimi
thelittlegreencat chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
WOW! that was AMAZING! im speechless! i havnt checked ur account yet, but im hoping to find some sort of sequal to this! because this has the makings of a great story!
Visal chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
That was interesting at the very least but you should be more responsible in your warning. This needed an appropriate warning of rape. I don't like reading rape stories without warning, I would still have read it but I don't appreciate how little respect you show your readers by not giving us the choice to read or skip it. Please place an appropriate warning for the story (or in the summary) on this or any others you might write in the future. Not everybody likes reading about rape, it's a very serious and sensitive subject and needs to be addressed as such.
ashcola17 chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
Ooooohhhh please tell me this isnt a one-sjot. can i at least request mayby one or two more parts to this.
shadowglove chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
WOW...*is otherwise speechless*
Alhena-star chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
Oh, This made me shiver!

*blushing*
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