Reviews for Lone Ranger
starfire25 chapter 1 . 2/6
interesting. i like it.
Acrystar chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Complete ? Noway ! I love John as a protector, and I'm glad you don't write on the post trauma subject like tons of authors. But the story can't stop there, right ? Maybe a little sequel ? Please ? XD Thank you for the story !
Sundai chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
You should increase the rating to M but mostly you should warn people that this is an AU. Warning about subject matter would also be a considerate idea, you might gain more fans if you treat them with respect.
Teldra chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
I like this but it doesn't seem to be complete. It feels like you left off when the story is just starting to begin. Any chance there will be more to this?
hhjust931 chapter 1 . 12/9/2009
Um, can't say much for the story. Good description, I suppose, but not much in the way of original back story or characterization. Maybe you'll explore it a bit more, but at the moment, it seems a very trite, very used plot.

Oh, and I might suggest that you place this under 'M'. There are some details that are a bit too, well, detailed for the teen section.
smoking caramels chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
This was very good, is there any chance you'll continue this?