|Reviews for Naruto the Next Death|
| god of all chapter 7 . 1/28
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon
| Ndasuunye chapter 4 . 12/29/2013
Well let's jump to the main heart of this review. Zaraki is the monster but Naruto is not? What the hell is up with Amaterasu. If it burns things to death in everlasting fire, why the fuck did Gin survive? The man should have long since died once the flames reached his heart. Did ANY of Gin get burned off? The one thing that always bothered me was that no matter who survived the flames of Amaterasu (I'm looking at Karin and Madara and Tobi) their hair just stays in perfect tandam. Hell, when the flames copiously burned at Karin, her clothes should have been the first to go just like when madara was burned. I would think you'd cut that shit out here since you control the world but apparently not. Regardless, Gin should be frigging at the very least, badly burned since those are very hot flames and he burned for a very long time. But it seems that he didn't even get a twisted mark on his skin? WTF? Yes you explained his nerves were short circuted but what else man? In this case lack of details is the worse.
All this yet, everybody fucking cheers that Naruto literally nearly tortured a man to death but Zaraki is the monster? Where's the logic there bucko?
So instead of the abilities of the sharingan working through the eyes, you had them work through sentient objects? That's different and a good alternative to a power down. Allow them to dodge a speeding bird, the same manner of way to dodge a speeding Soi-Fon and her two shot sting of death, Suzumibachi. Alright really clever way to even the playing field a bit and even throw newcomers to the technique off guard. Will the random ass memories be explained because I thought Naruto sat in medative comatose for over dozens of millenia. Why is it that you don't use the original Kage Bushin. I'm sure an experienced Shinigami can find some way to find the real Naruto, give some sense of complications to the boy. You throw off his whole style when each clone has one tail? What's the deal with that? but Lastly, why the heck did Toshiro not even bother to meet his long lost friend. Can't say he didn't recognize him as he has 10 tails. Pretty distinguishable feature.
| NARUHAREM FOREVA chapter 7 . 12/24/2013
...wtf is going on? did naruto split into 3 parts or something? is that what the man in chains was? a second naruto? one to go to hueco mundo, and another to the seireitei? while the one in soul society split further into the body and the sogyoku? i don't get it?!
| uscias chapter 7 . 10/20/2013
Please update soon.
| LegionsEnd56 chapter 7 . 10/7/2013
Awesome love the story I can't really find anything wrong with it besides some oc'ness in some of the characters speech and the vocabulary but the good over all good story and that idiot dude who said it was trash don't listen to him okay because your story is awesome and I love it so don't stop writing
| Ski-en chapter 7 . 9/25/2013
Ok first of all, the ending scene between Naruto and Sasuke fight was the most annoying part of your story I mean when Sasuke's about to die, he becomes all apologetic and wishing to meet in their next life again after trying to kill Naruto and even backstabbing him when Naruto showed him mercy and Naruto being the delusional fool he is he probably forgave him, so WTF's with that it doesn't make much sense. Sorry had to let that out, other than that your story's really good, its written really well and I like how the story pace is going though after Chapter 5 somehow it kind of lost its spark and a little bit disappointing with the chapters after that. Well hope the next chapters get better..!
Author-Repiece : The Revolutionist
Great story really like Luffy's character, glad that he isn't all serious and brooding, love his goofy side it kind of keeps the story interesting. I'm curious though with Catherine's ability does it have any limitations cause I mean being able to control time is some serious shit and you were kind of vague about it. One thing I dislike about Time-travelling fictions is when the character reveals he's from the future and what not without thinking about the consequences, I mean he should atleast be careful about what he says and do because the future and the information he has about it will become irrelevent if he change too much. So thats the only thing I found annoying about the story, I don't mind him revealing to his crew about being one of the Revolutionist since it of explains how he's so strong...!
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/17/2013
Best Naruto/Bleach crossover fic i've ever seen, please don't give up on it! I't has too much potential to just fade away.
| Synapses chapter 7 . 9/13/2013
You are one of the best writers on this site, your spelling is good, you are creative and you know when to use dialogue and how to express what's happening in a way that the readers imagination easily interprets it. This fiction could easily reach the top reviewed in the Bleach/Naruto crossover category if you could just update regularly, i'm not saying devote your life to this but if you could just make a monthly update rate it would certainly become very popular. I hope you consider this. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| gekkokage chapter 7 . 9/9/2013
This was good, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Your story is looking to be flowing quite well so far, and nice upgrade to Barragan's skillset.
| Unnatural Reader chapter 2 . 9/7/2013
Good jump from scene to scene
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/7/2013
Coyette stark! He is tough
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/7/2013
A tall man and a small girl . hmm. Sound a bit familiar.
| Unnatural Reader chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
Great twist at the end, and great start
| Sables chapter 7 . 9/7/2013
This is story is fucking epic, i hope you don't abandon this beauty.
| WalkingStranger99 chapter 7 . 9/7/2013
Great chapter and story, keep it up.