Loved it. Glad you made them seem relatively "normal", if there's such a thing. I think not. We all have a little crazy in us and no one should be ashamed of it no matter how severe.

Loving this story but let's be honest, in the real world neither of them would barley be able to walk or move with broken ribs and Emily for sure wouldn't be able to move and kiss Naomi's whole face with a broken collarbone FCS.

Omg the whole gang's a bunch of crazies!

Nice going Emily. Flight of ideas eh?

This is so good! I loved the last sentence. Yes it was cheesy but you know what, I loved it and I got equally as cheesy goosebumps. I know this is all quite late but thank you for sharing such an amazing story :)

So very beautiful

Uh oh..

I think I'm a little scarred after Danny's comment. Lol!

That was so sweet. Emily cherishes and loves Naomi, scars and all.

I was afraid Naomi was going to run, but I'm so glad she didn't. They talked through it and that's great. :)

I'm excited to see what Emily thinks of her first time :)

I'm so glad they were able to be released for a few hours and now for overnight.

They are adorable

Awwwwwwwwwwww

Completely forgiven in my books now, Cook is. He came to their rescue.

Wow, I can't believe Naomi admitted that. So willingly too. Sure she was feeling vulnerable, but she said it and meant it.

That's cute that Emily thought of it as their first date. Too bad it ended badly though.

Effy scared me there for a second. I thought she was warning Naomi off because she liked Emily, as in like like. I hope they'll all eventually get on with each other.