omg, omg, omg!

Cagalli!..:D

haha,this chapter was great! I can't wait for your next update!

I'll be wait for your update

o.o wow,finally a major twist...and DAMN,athrun...is...boned.

Cagalli is pregnant that's a surprise. The part about the mechanics was pointless. Great chapter

OH MY GOSH! Cagalli is PREGNANT?

Athrun is in quite a dilema now. Please update soon! :)

thanks for the chapter.

It's quite a surprise to have a cagalli in pregnancy, I wonder what athrun will do?

anyway looking forward to your next release.

good luck and have a nice day.

Athrun Zala, you are a dead man. This is definitly going to be motive for Kira to kick your stupid butt. Man, things are definitly getting very. Interesting now. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

i have to ask is Mayu going to meet Shinn?

This is not a Flame. but a carefully thought out criticism.

i am really sorry to say this but i hated this chapter.

i could have just watched the episode of this scene. it went exactly like the anime. i was glad to see you taking the story and making it your own, but with this chapter... i just wasted 30 minutes reading this chapter. i could have just skipped it and not missed a beat. the main problem in this chapter is the lack of anger from Kira. it was bad in the anime and yours didn't do it justice either. Kira is talking to a re-brainwashed athrun and nicol about zaft attacking his wife. where is the anger? where is the passion? i was waiting for Kira to launch into a tirade about what was going on. and not only does that happen you let athrun have the last word. Athrun is the picture of stupidity in this anime. you can not find anyone stupider, other than shin... and every other zaft person... alright lets just say he is the stupidest main character, and no i do not count shin as a main character he is an antagonist. his back story is stupid, i hate orb because the freedom saved my life when the alliance attacked orb in the last anime. NO thats just moronic and just proves how much a whinny _ he is.

im sorry i do not want this to be taken as a flame or anything overly negative. i really like your story and your writing style, could use some improvements, is very good. I was just waiting for this confrontation and was very let down by the results that i read. Don't be afraid to make this story your own. change things up and change outcomes, you did that earlier, but didn't do that here and it was disappointing.

Kira is shown as calm cool and collected throughout both entire seasons, except during the desert tiger episodes of the first season. i want to see that anger again. you can not have him be completely fine with this betrayal by athrun. dont be afraid to show some anger. he needs too.

im off to read your next chapter i hope its better than the last one. keep up the good work. your story is fun to read. well except for this chapter

that was a nice chapter, can't wait for the next one,(:

mir and dearka are funny. Great to see the story from their perspective now on to Kira and lacus. Can't wait for the next chapter.

A good chapter, we se the results of Luna's mission, more of Rey "training" Shinn and finally see a little bit of fun on with the Archangel's crew

If cagalli went back the seirans would have her killed so they could remain in power or if they didn't kill her they have all the other representatives under their control tht cagalli couldn't stop them. I can't wait for Kira to just totally dolminate athrun and destroy his machine in one move. Same goes for nicol he should be deafeated as well as shinn

I love your story, I can't wait for the next chapter:D

Good chapter. Mayu is going to meet Shinn isn't she?