Hmmm interesting take of Lunamaria captured and then she bumps into her sister on the Archangel.

Loving this so far!

great chapter please continue soon

First off great chapter honestly have been waiting for this to update it is one of my top 3 fics on this site. Of the mass-produced units I personally like the Ginn/C.G.U.E. (i prefer to think of the C.G.U.E. as a variant of the ginn for vets), bucue (reminds me of a beloved pet), and lastly the gouf ignited because i think the extendable sword looks awesome. In regards to the painful encouter with yuna, you made me flinch in phantom pain did you have to be so descriptive?

Of course the Murasames are the best mass produced ms. Nothing can be better than your own transforming mobile suit, well except get your own gundam. I know it's not gonna happen here with Cagalli's pregnancy and all, but I'm still a bit disappointed that she didn't pilot the Akatsuki because I'd like to see her kicking Shinn's emo ass and not be trashed so easily like in GSD. We know she is a better pilot than that.
Cagalli beating the life out of Yuna will always be one of my favorite scenes in GSD, and I also enjoyed it here. Even though I wanted her to beat him a lot more I also didn't want her to waste her energy on unimportant matter like that.
Also I can't help but notice that your writing has improved a lot. That shows that you are a dedicated writer and I admire you for that.

Thanks for the chapter

This is an excellent story so far

The only thing I didn’t like about it was that you didn’t include the junius seven incident that occurred in Episode 6 and 7 of Seed Destiny

Honestly I truthfully want Shinn to survive and change with the help of Mayu and actually turn him into a decent character like they failed to do in canon and only bettered him in those SRW Games. Shinn actually became likable there. And yeah, I did notice Shinn is more unstable here than in actual canon. The kid wasn't this insane. Emo and angry yeah but not this crazy.

Heck in fact I want Shinn to actually defect somehow. And Mayu can be that key and guide him to rehabilitation.

Will Kira show up with Strike Freedom with Lacus and the DOM Troopers? That sounds really interesting if they decides to show up.

Personally I like the Murasame the best out the mass produce ms.

thanks 4 new chapter,,

Very very good story I really liked it
I hope you can update it as soon as possible

I Love It! Can't Wait for the Next Chapter!

Yoo. Happy to see this again. I wonder if this shin will die like Yzak? He seems more unstable here... or it’s just me?

OMG I almost can't wait for the next chappy you my dear author are my favorite author on this site just for the originality, and grammar.

Great story keep up the good work!

If you don’t mind me asking. What is your update schedule?