|Reviews for The Charade|
| murmure etoile chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
Very good start! Continue!
| Audrey Grey chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
Amzing writing. Now update. I also wrote a story simpliar to this a few months ago for check it out it's called sleepover.
| magnolia-bunny chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
I can't help but be in love with your writing. If I could marry a fic I would marry one of yours lol. please, please update soon.
| fangirl94 chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
Love it so far!
Hm...feathers...wonder what THAT means...lol!
| SpAzZy CaUsE tHaT's Me chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
ha ha! i can't wait for Charlie to come!
| BearMistress chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Cute start to the story.
| rockstarvampire chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
ah, poor edward and his inability to do anything without overthinking. lookig forward to charlie coming and joining the party!
| Sisterlu chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
This sounds just like Edward talking. Always mulling things over way to much... That's what I love about him. We have that in common. I'm anxious to see how this plays out...a new adventure! As always well wrtten. Thanks.
| joayla chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
hi that was fantastic i am please you made it longer ! i cant wait now to see what happens next !
will you possibly consider writing alice and jasper in europe?
| favludo chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
love the humour, great start so far, cant wait to read more
| gallifrey calls now chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
yes. bella is stubborn... i wish i had a vampire bf. ha! *giggle* I am crazy tonight! anway, i loved it. continue!
| JayyeCullen-VampiresxTwilight chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
| HiSTinYDaNcER chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Wonderful as usual!
| longlivehp11 chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
I really want to read more! What happens when Charlie finds Bella sleeping in Edwards bed with him curled up next to her? Keep writing and update soon!
| westosobear chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Looking forward to the next chapter.