Reviews for The Charade
murmure etoile chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
Very good start! Continue!
Audrey Grey chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
Amzing writing. Now update. I also wrote a story simpliar to this a few months ago for check it out it's called sleepover.
magnolia-bunny chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
I can't help but be in love with your writing. If I could marry a fic I would marry one of yours lol. please, please update soon.
fangirl94 chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
Love it so far!

Hm...feathers...wonder what THAT means...lol!

Thanks,

-Sallie
SpAzZy CaUsE tHaT's Me chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
ha ha! i can't wait for Charlie to come!
BearMistress chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Cute start to the story.
rockstarvampire chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
ah, poor edward and his inability to do anything without overthinking. lookig forward to charlie coming and joining the party!
Sisterlu chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
This sounds just like Edward talking. Always mulling things over way to much... That's what I love about him. We have that in common. I'm anxious to see how this plays out...a new adventure! As always well wrtten. Thanks.
joayla chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
hi that was fantastic i am please you made it longer ! i cant wait now to see what happens next !

will you possibly consider writing alice and jasper in europe?
favludo chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
love the humour, great start so far, cant wait to read more
gallifrey calls now chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
yes. bella is stubborn... i wish i had a vampire bf. ha! *giggle* I am crazy tonight! anway, i loved it. continue!
JayyeCullen-VampiresxTwilight chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
awhh mann.
HiSTinYDaNcER chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Wonderful as usual!
longlivehp11 chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
I really want to read more! What happens when Charlie finds Bella sleeping in Edwards bed with him curled up next to her? Keep writing and update soon!
westosobear chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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