Reviews for The Charade
Bells. Just Bells chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
This was a perfect moment that could have happened! Oh Edward, he's just so...Edward. lol He should listen to Bella :)

Can't wait to see what Charlie discovers, lol!
Daddy's Little Pyro chapter 2 . 3/1/2012
I found it funny, and loved that Charlie was checking up on his daughter. Angry Bella is funny.
durteelilsecret chapter 2 . 2/22/2012
Great! I liked the beginning part, that wasn't there before. It really adds a nice touch to the overall (effect of the) story!
bronzed topaz chapter 2 . 12/16/2011
This is hilarious. My favourite line? That last one with Emmett. And the following thought from Edward. For some reason, these kinds of stories always attract me. You did a great job writing this.
lindsey21412 chapter 2 . 10/27/2011
Somehow, I've missed this little gem. It's hilarious! Emmett's humor is priceless. Thank you for the well-thought-out little glimpse into their lives, and for a great laugh!
Dil9 chapter 2 . 10/22/2011
Absolutely hilarious!loved it! Pls continue this lovely story
Jenna Gilmore chapter 2 . 10/19/2011
I loved everything about it!
ellena chapter 2 . 10/3/2011
lol..i have had orange right afta brushing my pretty lov ur
RebeccaMCullen chapter 2 . 8/25/2011
I hate having anything to drink but water after brushing my teeth, especially when the tooth paste is Arm & Hammer. Anything after that tastes disgusting until the taste of it is gone.

I'm so glad that Emmett calling out Charlie didn't end up in a disaster.

I thought it was funny.
PinkMermaid chapter 2 . 8/22/2011
Absolutely hilarious! I've made the mistake a couple of times of having orange juice after I'd done my teeth, it tastes nasty when I do that lol
McKStar chapter 2 . 8/14/2011
Hahahahaha "Edward's practically gay." LOL that was hilarious xD Ewwww orange juice after brushing teeth...bleh! Anyways, this was cute & funny hahah:) Thanks! Please check out my stories too!


miskaterina chapter 2 . 7/31/2011
OMG this was way too hilarious:) keep writitng stuff like this
greeneyedbronze chapter 2 . 7/24/2011
It rocked... I laughed my ass off... You shud make more stories like this
tookeeluv chapter 2 . 5/26/2011
Very enjoyable little 2-shot! Emmett is an absolute riot! Tks for posting... :)
saree192 chapter 2 . 5/13/2011
haha I loved this! especially emmett lol x
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