Reviews for The Marksman
Hazelnut4o6 chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Haha, this was actually quite amusing. I'm surprised at the "weirdness" that is Bella. She has never come off as so... annoying. Haha it's funny actually. She always seems so perfect in Edward's eyes. )
mickeyd12 chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
cant wait for more
ASHLEYYYBLACKBERRYYY chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
great job!
Just Waiting chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Oh,oh,oh...Loving Westward...I'll definately be here next chapter...:)...JW
SweetThunder chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
I love how grimy and hot this story is already. The sand and heat are sure to become a pressure cooker of love for crazy izzy and Eddie
fanficreader83 chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
oh, these two are definitely going to be fun! ;)
donnah77 chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Hey Mel & Bel! Great start here! Looking forward to learning more about Ward & Izzy, and having them get to know each other a little better too. I think I like hot angry Westward...
aishwar6 chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
This is a great story.
Meztli14 chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Hmm...interesting. I love this beginning. It really grabs the reader. Now I want to know more. I seriously thought that was Tanya but we shall see! Continue girls! 10/10
lostinapapercup chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
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this is going to be delicious. i can already tell. :D
mamaof6 chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Very good! Gotta love a romantic western.
sersmom chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
"Westward" huh, this is going to take some getting used to. :-)

I have liked everything else that you have written so I will keep reading.

It will be fun to see what you do with the characters while keeping them recognizable. Thanks! -Diana
midnight nightmare chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Intersting beginning. I'm quite curious to see where this is going...

Keep on the good work _
Twlightforever chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Nice start

I like that he is not "ga ga" over her.
OliviaJane chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Cuteness! Fabulous start. Can't wait to find out why she's called Crazy Izzy. :)
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