Reviews for The Geeks of NCIS and the FBI
Sehkmet chapter 9 . 9/6/2014
How could Luna be 16, an NCIS agent, and have worked with the FBI? Mary Sue much?
Sehkmet chapter 8 . 9/6/2014
No one lets 16-year-olds become agents. Parents be damned. Why was there a DNA test in the first place?
Anyways, you need to fill in the blanks more. Chapter two is McGee an Reid getting kidnapped, then they've been there three days. It is irritating.
Hhhh chapter 4 . 4/24/2014
Okay, first of all: why don't you just insert the question? It's really weird. There is literally not one logical reason for you to cut the question out. It distracts from the story, and it's just not something readers will want to see. Can you imagine this happening in a book? The author just cutting whole sentences out and going: "yeah, if you wanna know what they said, go to this vid" So yeah, don't do it, it'll make your story better when you just insert the questions
Brittgirl015 chapter 11 . 3/1/2014
Kind of confusing, and I am upset to even think McGee would leave someone behind when he escaped and I thought the plot was a little difficult to follow. But on the positive side the idea was great you should definitely write more about NCIS and Criminal Minds crossovers.
Sailor Pandabear chapter 11 . 2/4/2014
eh... you didn't mention if they caught the unsub/ criminal.
Gracfully chapter 4 . 11/15/2013
think it's neat that Reid & McGee talked to each other also hope they are found
Gracfully chapter 2 . 11/15/2013
:)
Gracfully chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
like it
Gazzy8 chapter 2 . 1/28/2013
Yes
power of darkness chapter 7 . 8/1/2012
I have read worce...way worce done to him blieve it or not and I can belive he left him :( FIND HIM
power of darkness chapter 6 . 8/1/2012
hmmmmm why was he set free
power of darkness chapter 5 . 8/1/2012
short and very good
power of darkness chapter 4 . 8/1/2012
just one sami good word...odd
power of darkness chapter 3 . 8/1/2012
hmmmmm need more realy so off I go
power of darkness chapter 2 . 8/1/2012
how short but bittersweet wonderful
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