|Reviews for The bodyguard|
| eli-dunbigboot chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Thanks for the warning! Probably the raciest slash I've read so far but I loved every minute of it. No way on earth was I gonna hit that red X on the right hand top corner of my screen.
*groans* You've written 57 other stories! OMG I'll be here forever!
| ehee chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
I loved this story! I hope you do continue after the contest. I'm putting you on author alert, just in case! I would love to see the story play out - two gay men raising two kids - lots of potential there!
Great job, good luck in the contest!
| weatherday chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
yikes i never thought i would find a story about a gay DILF so effing hot!
| cocoalvin chapter 1 . 11/29/2009
I really liked your E & J and would love to read more. Thanks.
| sugar rae chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
I could definitely see this as a full story. I wonder though how they will deal with dating and having a professional relationship.
| mikaylex chapter 1 . 11/19/2009
*mopping drool of my keyboard*
Holy crap that was one hell of a story. The UST was killing me, so thank you so much for resolving it. I know it was a one shot for the contest, but characters like that must have more to say. So more gay DILF Edward and hot nanny Jasper please?
| lynntjax chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
OMG! That was so hot! Hope you do make it a story- very interesting twist! Great job!
| ssmg chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
id love a continuation! this was fucking fantastic. most stories i read jasper is the shy one and edward is totally confident, but i love the shy and insecure edawrd. (:
| twilightdragons chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
Please please please continue this! All the stipulations for a great story and your writting is exelent :)
| VAVikingGirl chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
You did a great job. Loved the story. I would follow it if you decided to make it an MC. I'll put it on alert just in case.
| ArcadianMaggie chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
I really enjoyed your story! Good luck with the contest.
| BadRose7 chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
So good! Edward/Jasper lemons are my favorite and this is a really good one. Thanks. Write more.
| hellogoodbye chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
love it. nuf said.
| fischstaebchen chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
gah i love the dilf! I want a dilf! or a hot bodyguard.,.. actually I wouldnt mind both either.
great story and I'd LOVE a full story of it!
| idancewithvamps chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
that was amazing! :D prlly one of the best slash fics i've read! great job!