Reviews for The bodyguard
BeCullen chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Great job. I loved it. I hope you will get inspired and turn it into a multi chapter story. I think these two could have a wonderful story to share. Good luck with the contest.
icefang7 chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
that was just, wow! thankd
TwistedforTwilight chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Very cute story. Good luck in the contest.
Freckles0628 chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
hehe u should make this in2 a story (or one with the same people different plot line)
ickaren chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
I actually have read a gay DILF story, and yours was super-hot. The other was really good too. But Jay, I always like your stories! This one was very charming, too. Great characterizations, but that is part of what you do so well.
dannycullenbr chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
i loked the idea but i wished i have read it as a short fic 'cause as it's a one shot is kinda rushed. but yeah, u did a great job as always )
gjmburgess2000 chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Yea I like it
HopelessRomantic79 chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
M, I loved that! SUPER sexy, *sigh*. I love J/E, especially when Jasper takes charge. So good. :-D Oh, and my dad was an MP, too, so I knew what Jasper meant. Hehe.
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