|Reviews for Secrets, Lies, & Family Ties|
| deleteddddd chapter 15 . 12/30/2009
I was a little disappointed at the start when I saw John Mayer lyrics...really can't stand him lol...I know I'm a minority there but he doesn't do it for me!
Loved the flashback, hopefully more of that to come?
Also - YAY A KISS FINALLY! I seriously almost teared up at points of this chapter it was so cute. I'm glad Edward is going home (unless he pulls a Rachel from Friends in the next chapter and runs back?) because I'm so curious as to how he will feel when he's apart from them (lonely?). E I love the building tension, keep us guessing!
Have you posted this story on twilighted? I can't remember if I'd asked you that before. This story is so under-reviewed for how good it is!
| deleted reader chapter 15 . 12/30/2009
As much as I love cheesy airport goodbyes, this one nearly made me cry. I never read one with a kid. It was sad and kinda happy. I kinda wanna kick Edward for leaving and not saying "screw the damn job" but i know its gotta happen.
Perfect chapter. Update soon.
| verycrazytwilighter chapter 15 . 12/30/2009
Sad to see Edward gone, but it's gotta happen sometime. haha update soon! :D
| Soccer11 chapter 15 . 12/30/2009
uh oh what did that kiss mean
| snjez chapter 15 . 12/30/2009
fantastic...but so damn sad! i really hope they get their shit together...edward moves back and bella dumps james...please let that happen soon! but great job!
| cmitch chapter 15 . 12/30/2009
this chapter led me to tears so beautiful thank you
| cheermom13 chapter 15 . 12/30/2009
i think i got a little teary eyed on this one
| Source76 chapter 15 . 12/30/2009
That was heartwrenching! I am so happy that Bella is finally breaking down the walls she has up to protect herself. Can't wait for the next installment.
| gabs9 chapter 15 . 12/30/2009
What an emotional chapter, I loved it.
| EC4me chapter 15 . 12/30/2009
I really hope Edward is going back to Australia to quit his job and move back to Bella.
| Madison Elliott chapter 15 . 12/30/2009
tears loved it there is some hope right?
| owlsarebirdstoo chapter 15 . 12/30/2009
Nice way to make me bawl like an ifant there lady. :)
Seriously though, excellent writing. Awesome. It feels so real and I can't wait for more. I really hope Edward is able to find a job at least back in the states if not in Washington somewhere. Or Canada... that's close too, lol
| McCarthy's Girl chapter 15 . 12/30/2009
I cant believe what just happened. I hope Edward doesnt wait until Emmett's wedding to come back and claim his family. That includes Bella. I absolutely cant wait until the next chapter.
| mmichelle97219 chapter 15 . 12/30/2009
Its about freakin' time!
| eliza3ame chapter 14 . 12/29/2009
OMG, I love yoour story please update soon