|Reviews for Bon Idée|
| Catmint chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
WOW. This is powerful, moving, fantastic writing. You've captured both of them perfectly and the understated nature of this, with so much hanging in the air, works brilliantly. I don't have even the tiniest complaint about this and I'm adding it to my Favourites.
| rebecca-in-blue chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Wow. I love this - and I don't usually like Tiva! It was a beautiful look into Ziva's head, and into where she and Tony found themselves, post-Good Cop, Bad Cop. I especially love how Ziva tells him she will talk to him one day, but she needs more time.
| Amilyn chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
I love the moment where she reaches out and puts a hand on his arm. Very nice. You captured the quiet and even silent way they communicate on this show there well.
| doeboymomma chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
A friend recently gave me a link to your work. I love this story. I wish we had gotten some moments like this on the show. This is beautiful. Thank you
| 11nivea342 chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
i really love this. i was wondering if they'd ever mention ziva's line from s3 about "decided never to be captured alive". and i just, i love how somber she is about how her father would not come for her. and ic an see her not wanting to tell anyone about africa because it'd only be ab urden for them. so very strong, our ziva.
| Cricket Songs chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
You may not be entirely confident in this piece yourself (the good authors never are, you know) but I actually think it's wonderful! You handled the dialogue really well, too, I think. A lot of folks really butcher the characters by using sloppy, out-of-character dialogue, but I think the dialogue in this piece is really good. Very believable - I can totally see the characters having this conversation.
"those whom she had strived to impress for so many years hadn't expected her return;" sad but true.
| zatl chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
loved it :)
| AussieNinjaChick chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
YAY! It's like the missing part of the episode. Very good. You're not rusty! Good job!
| Rawadaneth chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
Well done. Loved it.
| DustyGreyAshes chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
It's really good, especially considering you haven't written anything for ages- you can stop being about to kill yourself for worry! You stayed pretty much in character, I'd say Tony might have been slightly out because although he's been caring for Ziva in a roundabout way and desperate to help her he seems shy of showing that e.g. changing the subject in the bathroom, but there was that moment in good cop bad cop where he looked like he was about to talk to her. Anyway, he has to get over that at some point so it's only a really minor thing. I like it!
| anonymous chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
beautiful! trust yourself more, this was great!
| Moonbebe chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Awesome story! I thought you had Tony & Ziva's characterizations down perfectly. I wish we would actually get a scene like this between those two! Well done. :)
| roselilie chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Hey this piece is actually very good. Its well written and easy to read. I think you stayed in character perfectly, but don't fret too much if you do stray a little with the characters especially Ziva. All of the characters personalities have changed (if only a little) in season seven.
I actually encourage you to continue on with this. It truly is a well written peice.
| kingshammer chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
I dunno why you were so worried. This was excellent. You really nailed the characters quite well. I'm looking forward to more.
| gsr4ever chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Good fic. Nice job