Reviews for Bon Idée
AthosionWarrior chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
love it. Great fic
Jena Rink chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Hey there! Its funny that you just wrote one of these, I just wrote my first NCIS story after a number of years off from writing. Your intro made me laugh because of that. Anyways, I really liked this. I think you portrayed Tony's emotions particularly well. I don't think you strayed from characters at all. It was great. I know how much it means to say something is a good writer, it makes my day anyways :), and I just wanted to tell you how well you set the stage with your descriptive narrative. Really made things easy to picture. Feel free to continue this! I'd totally read it.

meb chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
I thought this was very good. Much more realistic than the show has been concerning what Ziva must be feeling and thinking after experiencing such a horrible ordeal. Would like to see a second chapter.
Lovelihead chapter 1 . 10/17/2009
Okay, bitch, stop saying wawawawawawawawa i suck wifjijifsf. Becuause it's really, really good. You're better at going into their minds than I am. I'm like a dialogue whore. LOL so I really like this.

They're really in character too and even though I could go some hard core hot tiva lovin' it wouldn't be the same if they had sex after this because it wouldn't be in character. When things aren't in character I get angry ok.

"Did my grapes tingle, Tony?" l LMFAOO. We really need to start up a co-author account and write that. Obviously we are the most skilled tiva writers ever. We can write some hot tiva smut.

Oh and we need to write a tag for dagger i think it was about zivas tattoo, because there were never enough fics about that.

LMFAO. Oh and if you do not add to this fic i will kill you eighteen different ways with this paperclip :l So yeah, get writing ples thank.

What are we going to do when NCIS takes, like, that two week break, I think I will probably die becuase I'll be suffering mega major huge gigantic monolith... um big withdrawals. But hopefully I get Tiva for my birthday. Best birthday present evar.

Okay I have gone off on like a major tangent,to conclude this lengthy, but probably not really that lengthy at all, review I will say this: how dare you be insecure about this masterpiece, very unproffesional ok. *walks away*

So keep writing and write me a birthday fic too, ples thank. xooxoxox

luv mel
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