Reviews for Fine
Hey chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
I loved it
Jennifer l chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
I WANT TO READ MORE
the romantic girl chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
Don't feel ashamed it is very good. :)

I liked it. I have wrote something similar myself but way BIGGER. I have started the love story from scratch and added it to my own version.
Bellkie chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
I know this was done awhile ago but I just saw it and think it's adorable!
Heart Torn Out chapter 1 . 12/3/2010
Sweet
Veron chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
Hey, loved it. It was really cute. Captured the characters quite well.

Love to see you continue, it could be sweet.

these two never got enough time in the movie, but the action was pretty rad.

great story though. If you elaborate and add more feelings, it would be awesome.

Keep up the good work.
WitchRavenFox chapter 1 . 8/22/2010
I liked this short insight of the growing tenderness growing between them, along with their shared hatred and loss.

Nice short.
Signkat chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
I like it - very short & sweet!
Friday Night at the Mall chapter 1 . 3/16/2010
it was good, but kinda short, maybe you could extend into into a multi- chaper series of oneshots? i loved this movie and the stella/charlie romance, although there wasn't enough of it in my opinion :)
My-Room-Is-My-Retreat chapter 1 . 12/29/2009
Aw! Okay, So im sitting here with my sister and her boyfriend. Watching The Italian Job, for the the 12th time and we like JUST watched that part. So I'm really glad that you wrote this story! I was just thinking how that part should have gone differently.
defygravity79 chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
i really like it. shows the emotion between these two. i would have liked something like that in the movie. good job.
luckiestlulu chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
I think I need to go and find my toothbrush, for the lovely fluff that you wrote!

Thank you!

:)