Edgeworth IS British but alrighty :3

Only thing I have to complain about is that several times it was just 3 verbs, the third in italics.

C-A

Yeah, fangirls can scare Big Brand Firms into hiding!
And damn you for making me read on how sexual the features of a car are, Edgeworth! Now I won't get my driver's license... well, I wasn't really planning on getting one anyway.

C-A

this was really good until the whole, no lube no condom thing. jeez.. seriously. that would not work. not only would it not work but neither would enjoy it.

anyway, good description and both the characters were in character. so good job on that at least.

Wow! For the kind of fanfic this is, it was fantastic! You used wonderful descriptions and they both seemed so in character! Great job!

Oh god this was so great. I loved the parenthesis al over the place... and the car fondling. And the judge's sake! xD Just a tiny detail, I think you should use those verb strings a little less, like "sucking, slurping, sliding" and such. They're a pretty good resource, just don't overuse it. Keep writing. Forever. I lol'd a lot, and it was a great turn on at the same time. 3 Thanks~

Though I'd review two as well? Can't remember exactly what I wrote earlier. Either way part two: equally as good as part one. :3 You're very talented!

Ah! Love! The first PW fic I've read so far that captured the essence of both of the characters. I would have gladly kept reading. And this fic also needs more reviews! Bravo! You did an amazing job fulfilling that request. Can't wait to go delve into more of your writing now.

I also liked the touch of video game elements, like the new(?) car and the *kiss*. Genius. More love.

Nansterz. xox

D - HAPPY FACE!

Its been a while since I haven't read something so graphic. I really loved it XD! It was WAI too hawt )

wow! you're such a talented writer! you wrote every smexy detail in there, damn! this is too hot! all the tiny bits of details were there and you described it in oh so hot...

OOh nice :D I love it, the detail and everything was great. And I loved the beginning [with nicks needing to hide his expressions] made me laugh X3 I cant wait to read more of your fics 3

...I REMEMBER THIS STORY NOW. 8D

Gosh, it's been forever since I beta-read this for you! D:

Hot...hot hot, as always. For serious. ;D