|Reviews for Extra Visitation|
| J.DRAST chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Hello. S-W-E-E-T outtake! Loved it! Anymore in the works? Thanks, Suzan Noerr
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
I loved the story Visitation but thought that it ended rather abruptly. I'm so glad to see a continuation of the story here. Can't wait for the next installment!
| KeeWit chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
I wish there were some way to make that part of the regular story!
| Fliberty chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
I haven't read Visitation so I don't know any background or why is on Probation but thought I'd give this a read.
This is surprisingly sweet and innocent. You can really feel the frustration of them not being able to have any intimacy. It's great how Alice and Jasper work with them to give them just that. I'm guessing that their exploits could backfire though!
Their time together is sweet and passionate. I liked reading that from Edward's POV with his insecurities about his knowledge, technique and even his own appearance. This is a change from hearing Bella's thoughts about how perfect he is in relation to her!
| LittleMoCullen chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
| jjuliebee chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
Hi Amy. Sorry taken so long for me to read this. Loved it! Sweet romantic and hot. I love the way you've crafted your E and B and thrilled they finally have some much deserved happiness and orgasms!
| Kip chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
That was so cute. Just the right amount of anticipation and background.
| TwilightFan104 chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
That was so sweet. Loved it.
| RaindropsToo chapter 1 . 12/8/2009
Thanks for noting this outtake on Visitation A/N section; I didn't have you on author alert so I would have never known. I really loved this outtake. I sort of feel bad for Edward that he is working at Outback, but it is realistic and I love that he is an optimist and making the best out of his situation. It really did jump into the future, though, so now I wonder how Visitation is going to get to this point. Also, I am guessing that the Jasper-Edward switch-a-roo went fine and they didn't get busted. I thought Edward was really stupid for taking such a chance, but if they didn't get caught then meh. I'd just hate to see him back in juvie.
| AH Darling chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
so sweet! And I cannot wait for you to update (the regular) Visitation! One of my very favs.
| vixen1836 chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
Aw. This was very sweet. Bravo, Amy. :)
| kdc2239 chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
Loved this, so sweet!
| Twilightobsessed09 chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Oh! I loved that, it was so sweet and I can't wait tuil he's really out of Meyer. I loved Jasper in this. He was so funny, I was crackin' up. It was so nice their time together.
Can't wait for another chapter of Visitation...
See u then...
| BethMasenCullen chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Beautiful! Can't wait for more!
| luvyateamedward chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Loved this! Can't wait to read more. You are such a good writer.