Reviews for Phoneixstar's Begining
GinnyStar chapter 2 . 2/20/2010
Well written, good inaction and good backgroud.
Obzzezed chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
It would be better with more chapters and way more writing
xXPantheraXx chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
Its spelled Phoenix, not Phoneix. Chapters should be way longer than what you have, and try spacing the sentences when someone new talks.