Reviews for Unlocked
Guest chapter 7 . 2/20/2017
Absolutely love how you've incorporated the twins and Lavender in your story! Love how they're actually good friends, that there's no backbiting or petty jealousies, that GIRL POWER RULES! Fantastic!
Guest chapter 6 . 2/20/2017
Sirius is a weird lover.
Guest chapter 5 . 2/20/2017
I take it we're finished with Lavender's portion of the program? I wanted to read more about what all she'd done to help Hermione come into her own. That part was truly brilliant!

I know that as the reader I'm supposed to be feeling badly for Sirius, but I just can't, not really. He was too much of an ass for too long to Hermione for her to roll over and beg at the first sign of affection from him.
Guest chapter 4 . 2/20/2017
Obliviating her parents was the silliest, stupidest thing Hermione has ever done. Poor Viktor, he deserves someone whole. I missed the part where he stomped Sirius into the ground - you meant to write that, right? Sirius is nothing more than a rabid dog with a bone. He doesn't deserve Hermione, not at all. He's just playing a sick game with her.
Guest chapter 3 . 2/20/2017
Disappointed that Hermione didn't make the arrogantly thoughtless asshole twins grovel. I'm starting to see that this Hermione has no backbone at all whatsoever, and it's sad.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/20/2017
At this point in the story given Sirius' jackassery I'm hoping Hermione has a great fling with Viktor.
VillainessBlack chapter 11 . 9/30/2016
I've always had a special love for this ship and this is hands down my favorite fanfic of any fandom. I just adore it. It's wonderfully written and so unique. I come back and read it every few months when I want something romantic and slightly tragic. *sigh* beautifully done.
Calimocho chapter 11 . 7/11/2016
Awesome ff!
Led it's!
- Liz
Sundaegirl99 chapter 11 . 6/9/2016
Love this! Flambeau is one of my favorites and I was ecstatic when I found this! It's brilliantly written and they go together seamlessly.
MyBear chapter 7 . 1/15/2016
This is so amazing so far! I can't believe it has so little reviews! This story is written very well - so well I think I might have to go back and review every single chapter :3
moonlightkiss1515 chapter 11 . 11/12/2015
093402192832323 chapter 11 . 2/22/2015
I'm not usually drawn to Harry Potter fan fics, but I've got to admit, this was outstanding. I've always shipped this pairing and I love the format of the story. It was truly s beautiful ending, you've wrapped it up perfectly. I was ver y close to tears when I realized this was the last chapter, but they were bittersweet tears. Lovely story, it's rare that I could find such a treasure in the mist of nowadays fan fictions.
j-jip chapter 11 . 3/17/2014
This is my favorite sirius/hermione fanfiction ever. I thought you ought to know that. And also, I adore your writing in general. This was just amazing, and I don't know how it doesn't have a million reviews. It should. The beginning hooked me in, and I was enthralled by your writing right until the very end. Amazing work, really.
DarkPriestessOfHyrule chapter 8 . 2/1/2014
Am I the only one to spend almost every italicized memory hazy eyed? It was so lovely and it hasn't even ended. I love this so much I feared she wasn't going to wake up and it was brilliant how they did it as well. Very nice story.
Errow chapter 11 . 5/1/2013
I know this story was written quite a while ago, and I don't know if you'll read this review, but here I go:

This is one of my favorite Sirius/Hermione stories ever. It's so amazing and romantic. I don't think I've ever read something like this; where the story is split up into memories and then what's happening in the present. Also, the way you made it so Sirius never fell into the veil was very unique.

Also, I loved the secondary characters. Lavender, the Patil twins, Fred and George, Viktor, they were all amazing. I've never seen an author do such a good job with Viktor especially. I think you made me start shipping that pairing now. Also, Lavender is usually the victim of a lot of hate, but I loved how you made her a genuinely good character.

As for Sirius and Hermione, I've always loved the pairing, and the way you write them is just spectacular. It's realistic and not too cheesy or far-fetched. Also Sirius is downright sexy as hell...

All in all, it was a really wonderful story, and you write so well. I loved it.
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