Reviews for Unlocked
mUmaRhz chapter 11 . 3/21/2013
Aww I loved this story!
Angelus Draco chapter 11 . 12/9/2012
A beautiful story.

Thank you for a truly enjoyable experience. Loved it all - but I loved the bit where he was all Alpha male growling at Bella; loved seeing him blast her as well.

christev chapter 11 . 11/12/2012
Ah. *sighs happily* This story took a lot of turns I wasn't expecting to get to this lovely ending. I like that you didn't just have them make up, then immediately get together seamlessly. I like your choice to have Hermione realize she couldn't just be holed up with him, but needed her 'real world'. You've done a nice job portraying Sirius. I'm not truly a Sirius fan, nor a Sirius/Hermione shipper, but really enjoyed your story. One of the things I like about this story is that you show him sometimes being a hot-head or a jerk (which I feel is definitely the way he comes off in canon), but also as sexy, romantic, and vulnerable. Your story had a very good balance of plot and lemons, and drama, humor, and romance. Really nicely written - thanks for sharing.

(p.s. don't know if I was logged in for the other review I left you several chapters ago, but that was me saying how you'd moved me to tears)
Guest chapter 4 . 11/12/2012
What a beautiful, emotional chapter, you had me in tears multiple times. The way you paint Viktor is really quite lovely, the epitome of selfless love. And the way you've portrayed Hermione's torturous emotions is powerful and painful. Well done.
UDHPTGQ chapter 11 . 8/2/2012
I forgot to log in, but I'm the person who left the last review (in case there's anything you want to reply). I hate to give negative reviews, but I really wanted to be honest with you, especially because, like I said, I'm a big fan of your other work.
Guest chapter 11 . 8/2/2012
I put off reading this story because, even though I absolutely love your writing, I couldn't stand the versions of either Sirius or Hermione in the story you based this one on. And while I'll never be crazy about the pairing in this particular universe (I guess I just can't associate the Hermione who fell into Sirius' arms the second he came to her with an apology after a year of treating her like crap, with canon Hermione- or even your Hermione from your other stories). I do think that you managed to make them both infinitely more likeable than they were at first and I loved the conversation in the chapter before last- it made their relationship seem a lot more plausible.
Also: props for giving Sirius glasses. I have a very, very soft spot for men who wear glasses. ;)
ladygoddess8 chapter 11 . 6/11/2012
An adorable story. I like the use of mediation as a solution to not becoming insane.
marqueen137 chapter 11 . 4/19/2012
i love this story si much. this is like my 5th time reading it.
MyGuiltyPleasures chapter 11 . 6/30/2011
Great story. I loved it.
OverTheTopHyperAlien chapter 10 . 5/15/2011
Your story is brilliant. I love it. Thanks for writing.
SiriusJess chapter 11 . 5/8/2011
Loooovvved it! Fantastic story.
SopranoandBass chapter 11 . 1/2/2011
This story was absolutely beautiful. I am awed by your writing skill and plot creation skill. I could never have done this amazing job with an AU story and making torture absolutely romantic. I loved the flashbacks mixed with reality, and the devotion in many forms that came with each character. From Sirius, and Victor, Harry, and Tonks, and even the others there was so much devotion, and that contrasted amazingly with Hermione's conflicted nature.

I loved that you were able to incorporate Lavendar, Pavarti, and Padma so easily. Many writers of fanfiction feel the need to explain the sudden friendship because it wasn't featured in the books. You, however, used one short, descriptive, easy sentence and summed up years of friendship, or at least years of semi-friendship.

I loved the little details, especially the gloves-to-hippogriff change. I loved that Sirius and Hermione addressed their age difference and moved past it; I especially liked that Hermione saw the parallels between her own situation and the situation of Tonks. I loved that little nod to the future concerning Teddy, and how the entire rest of the story after him looked to the future. And last, but never least, I loved your minute, and creative descriptions that brought the story to life: namely "sodium snow". I loved this entire story, I was so very well done. Amazing! I can't wait to read more of your work!
Los Grotos chapter 4 . 11/20/2010
God save her.
Los Grotos chapter 3 . 11/20/2010
Pulp's "Death" really fits this story.

God love her.
house3er4ev chapter 11 . 8/21/2010
so sweet and hot utterly romantic!
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