Reviews for Unlocked
mudpuddledemon chapter 11 . 6/20/2010
Very sweet. I was hoping for babies, but it was a lovely end.
ShokaLokiRen chapter 9 . 6/12/2010
Love this!

I've read it over five times this year.

It was lovely.
m'moiselle chapter 11 . 3/22/2010
WOW. I haven't reviewed for any of the previous chapters of this story only because I was too intent on getting to the next one, but i really want to say something now. Congratulations! This story is excellent-amazing-astounding-superb! It is so sweet, but not eye-cringingly so, and it is so well executed!The characters are beautifully fashioned and the dialogue really adds to the story and the progression of events is flawless and the diction is fabulous and the grammar/spelling is impeccable and the action is exciting without being overpowering and and and!

Thank you so much for posting- you are one of my favorite authors on this site and I think your popularity is well-deserved!

keep up the STUNNING writing!

Kimarya chapter 6 . 3/15/2010
"Hermione let her eyes wander over the tattooed planes of Sirius' muscled chest, a lazy smile playing across her lips. No wizard his age should look this delicious, she thought with amusement. Her smile faded into a tiny frown, however, as she realized it would never do to say such a thing to him. Not now, at least, while he so clearly had it in his head that she was still so young and naïve, practically a child. The last thing she needed was more of him thinking he was 'too old' for her. He'd been her first, but Morgana knew, at eighteen, she was more than ready."

I thought it was odd, but in the last sentence, the name "Morgana"shows up out of nowhere. I think it's supposed to be Hermione?

Good story so far though 3
kaylamarie2012 chapter 11 . 2/19/2010
very cute you did a great job!

caughtinblackseyes chapter 4 . 1/10/2010
Holy Hannah, I am just weeping buckets here. Viktor is so freaken' sweet that I want to hug him too. *sniff sniff*
MissJudged16 chapter 11 . 11/25/2009
Excellent. It was delicious and lovely and its one in the morning but thats okay! Because it was excellent and just... they make such a lovely couple. I always thought they would. You write the characters so well and the detail and the describtion you use. It was all very lovely. Keep up with the writing thing. You're obviously good at it.
Cassiopee chapter 11 . 11/18/2009
aww- tell me just how on earth do you manage to do a proposing scene in a non-cheesy way? hardly fair... and the secrecy as being part of the perfection of love is totally medieval too ;) so in my head - hermione read a lot of medieval romances. and maybe so did you? if not i'm definitely jealous you just came up with (in the good 'gosh she's brilliant way' not in the creepy 'hate her she's better')

i must admit i didn't want to read the chap for i didn't want the story to end :(

guess i'll be reading other stories of yours soon.

thanks for the excellent work and for sharing it.

much love,

Cassiopee chapter 10 . 11/17/2009
loved this one as well :) an it does sound more 'real' than the french cottage. and, again, the blushing/shivering is very medieval - thus perfect and refied love - and i love it :)

much love,

Cassiopee chapter 9 . 11/16/2009
that surely *is* a way you'd want to be taught and imprve your vocabulary.

did you know that the way sirius regards hermione - his adoration - is very much close to the medieval standards of the knight's love for the lady. coming from me, this is compliment since i am very much into med lit.


Cassiopee chapter 8 . 11/16/2009
aw, just love it! so sorry i didn't review the last chap - just read them thourgh now, stupid essays to hand in, had no social life whatoever for weeks!

those were just fab and i daresay i'm pretty jealous of your talent! I really like the characterization and the way sirius just teases her as she won't speak any dirty terms ;)

have to get back to study now (much unhappily) and try not to fail at resisting reading your fab fic!

hanks for your work and sharing it!

RagamuffinSundrop chapter 11 . 11/6/2009
Very nice
Lady Imara chapter 11 . 11/2/2009
This was a great story! I loved the flashbacks and how it tied in with the rest of the story. Perfect ending too.

I love Sirius and Hermione stories and I can't wait to read your other ones. I've written one too, if you want to check it out :)
nimath chapter 11 . 10/30/2009
Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing!
diamond-helen chapter 11 . 10/29/2009
Wow. this was so beautiful, and just amazing on so many levels.

I love the inclusions of Viktor and the Patil twins and how they're more involved than just background noise, as it were.

And I completely adored the way you write Sirius, how he's still cocky and a touch irritating at times, but also insecure and kind of lost. Really wasn't expecting the James/Lily/Sirius thing, but it made a lot of sense.

Completely brilliant, I'm in awe of how good this is.
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