| Reviews for Pale Shadows |
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   cocoa.choco.sprinkles chapter 1 . 2/14 Now THIS should be more than a one-shot. Although because it is a one-shot, I found the ending rushed. Not really surprising coming from me, eh? But your writing is truly captivating. I've found that the more I read it, the more I develop I taste for it. I really like the idea behind this story. And it makes my eyes tear up thinking of him waiting for such a long time to be reunited with the object of his love. The story clearly caught my imagination and interest. I can't properly express how much I like your writing. This story in particular really bloomed for me. You didn't have to go into detail for everything to just play out in my mind. It really tugged on my heartstrings. It helps, though, that ironically I ended up listening to a remix of tATu's "All the Things She Said." Some of the lyrics were hauntingly synced up to what I was reading, so a good soundtrack always helps in my opinion. :P But the power of your writing is undeniable. Thank you for sharing. CCS |
| serenityselena chapter 1 . 2/3 awesome story with interesting twists :) |
| Insane is my name chapter 1 . 1/17 Aww I loved it and go sessh and kagome and inutaisho :-) :-) :-) |
| 64teeth chapter 1 . 1/7 great story! I totally loved it! |
| val chapter 1 . 11/29/2013 Liked it!:-) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2013 I loved it, That you for sharing it with us and can't with to read more of your story's. |
| Lorii-chan chapter 1 . 10/4/2013 that was pretty nice! |
| Sook03 chapter 1 . 7/26/2013 How absolutely precious :-) |
| young kagome chapter 1 . 6/19/2013 Cute! I loved it! Keep up the great work! |
| Montara chapter 1 . 5/14/2013 Now that I know Kagome and Sesshomaru will be fine and together, I just wonder what happened to the others? Kagome is right, Sesshomaru's father was scary when he wanted to be! :)) I loved reading this story. Thank you! |
| Silvanon of the Orchard chapter 1 . 4/10/2013 Came back to re-read this one, and since I don't think I reviewed the first time, I will now. I love, love, LOVE your characterization of Inu-Papa in this story! The whole thing, too, but especially Inu-Papa. XD |
| Priss-hanyo chapter 1 . 3/7/2013 Oh wow, very well done! LOVED IT! |
| DragonRose4 chapter 1 . 3/5/2013 Beautifully done! I love it. |
| flamxfox chapter 1 . 3/2/2013 Wow. WOW. This was such a magnificent piece. I love it. Inu-papa was and still is always looking after his sons (": Sesshoumaru liking Kagome from the beginning when she made the wish was surprising. Gome-chan had caught his interest, huh? Anyway; this oneshot was long, but definitely a read-worthy piece. c: |
| Pannacotta chapter 1 . 2/10/2013 Amazing! I wish this happened in the real thing.. but no. |