Reviews for Iris
Ukaneful chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
I love this story. I don't see many Terra/Raven fics.
Raven chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
Hey this was pretty good-looking forward for reading more of your works. Have you thought about writing a story for those new characters you added in the end?
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Interesting.

Good use of the song. Iris is one of my personal favorites.

As one-shots go it seemed ... rushed. Could have used a little more poking around in Terra's head. Also, if you don't really ENJOY yuri, that makes it tough to write BELIEVABLE yuri. For example, since I don't ENJOY yaoi (although, oh boy, my wife sure does) I don't try to write it.

That epilogue section at the end probably contributed to the rushed feeling more than anything else. Whirlwind introductions and little else don't really satisfy, and the way Terra lost her sight seems kind of stilted.

I think if you expanded it enough to cover the various shortcomings, you'd have a good story.
DeArtist chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
Awesome! I really liked it. I hope to read more from you in the future.
Mark chapter 1 . 10/18/2009
that was pretty good for a short story luvu angel good job _