|Reviews for The Whole Truth, A Sweeney Todd Story|
| Charmingly-Evil chapter 8 . 1/7/2011
hey sage i was bored so i went to your profile. i remember when you first started to write this! actually you did do a great job. it is well written. are you ever going to update again?
| Enough is never enough chapter 9 . 10/18/2010
Awesome read, ingenious, you really need to write more.
| Sweenett 4evs chapter 9 . 6/8/2010
Cool story, i like it. it is very descriptive and gave me the shivers when i read the first chapter. i love it. please please please write more. PLEASE!
| Charmingly-Evil chapter 9 . 4/6/2010
ok, well...hm. il give u the negative points first.
a bit ooc ( out of charecter), i think sweeney announced his love for her a litle early. maybe, just a suggestion mrs. lovett can piss sweeney off. he trys 2 hurt her, she calims that he loves ehr n he can say he neva did ( but really he did) n said he was just using her 4 the sex? suggestion...
positive: it was well written, spelling n grammer was good! very descriptive, and the ideas were good.
| AngelBuffy-4eva chapter 3 . 12/4/2009
Yay. Great Chapter
Please Update Soon
Aw Your delaying the sweenet love ah well it just makes me want to read it more.
| AngelBuffy-4eva chapter 2 . 12/4/2009
OMG cliff hanger i'm gonna go and read the next chappie now i hope MR. T saves her.
Love the story talk to u soon i hope.
| Charmingly-Evil chapter 3 . 12/1/2009
C? AT LEAST IM QUICKKER AT REVIEWING! BTW U STILL Haven't reviewed. don't 4get the chip
| Charmingly-Evil chapter 2 . 11/13/2009
wow sage, just read it. so u did change that scene. wow. u could have told me! anyway lets se. i rate it 7 OUT OF 10 COZ GUESS WAT? THE STORY WAS ONLY OK! honestly, my story was worth a lot more then a 7 from u. anyway post the next chapter soon and REVIEW MY STORYS!
the slightly insane lydia
| HaPPyBuBBleBuRSTer chapter 2 . 11/11/2009
SAGE! How could you end it like that! You and your stupid cliff hangers! I'm really proud of you though, that smutt scene was pretty good...*nudge, nudge* Emma's proud to I think. Is there more, there is isn't there, you wouldn't just leave it like that, would you? Oh well, thanks for the smutt, you made my day!
Lots of love, HaPPyBuBBleBuRSTer! XD
| Ms Shay X Pear chapter 2 . 11/7/2009
Was an enjoyable read.
Liked the Sweenett bit of course lol
I had written some Sweenett myself...
Only criticism is that some of the scenes needed a bit more description.
Gosh Ill be very mad if Pirelli lays a hand on Mrs Lovett! Cocky prick. Lol.
Be interesting to see where it goes...
| AngelBuffy-4eva chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
Wicked this is awesome so far sage
love the god knows wat they did 2 him in australia bit
is this gonna be a sweenet story.
Please update soon
| Charmingly-Evil chapter 1 . 10/28/2009
yay sage, good job 4 finally posting the story. and remmbering the dvd! so now uv got ur first review. now review my story! though i should hopefully have the next chapter up 2nite. keep on writting, i'll think of wat 2 write 4 the next chapter soon.