props to our hero for not hoarding his knowledge of the future, and trying to use it to do some good.

Perhaps I'm too easy going and you're too hard on yourself, but this chapter you don't like works quite well for me. I suppose there's no "magic" to it, but it gets the job done in a manner that's completely plausible, and was in no way boring.

You have done a good job writing about a logical impossibility.

Vorrei tanto che continuasse la storia, mi piacerebbe leggerti ancora.

Very interesting read. And the last chapter leaves me with a healthy appetite for more. Seeing as it has been nearly three years again since the last chapter, maybe you could find it in you to continue?

Kami-Sama: With apologies to Spider Robinson, if I'm an iron, well, that's a hot one.

Questa storia è molto bella, ma vorrei che la continuassi per vedere se Kasumi può avere un approccio con Saffron, sarebbe grazioso creare questa coppia

Why are all the best fanfics unfinished and abandoned for years?

Definitely shipping Ukyo and Akane. Also got serious trans vibes of Ukyo.

In point of fact, the moment where the story diverges so far from canon as to become completely unrecognizable is when it hits its stride and starts getting REAL good. :)

Nicely done. By the way, the Whedon reference you used was from Whedon's TV series _Firefly_. Saffron was the busty red head and she married a very naughty mercenary captain who used the name Malcolm Reynolds.

Well, back to waiting to see if it'll take years for this to be updated again, I suppose...

More please

This was pretty entertaining. Damn, now I dont know if I ship Safron/Kasumi or Safron/Skuld. Maybe all of the above? Anyway would love to see you come back to this story at some point. Well written and original for sure. Thanks for writing :)

Yay, I'm now current and this is good! Hrm is wondering if 'Saffron' is going to end up with a fangirl base/harem Skuld and Kasumi so like him any others? X'D