|Reviews for His Own Man|
| Markjmcmurray chapter 31 . 11/27
Nice story! Where's the rest of it?
| Eyrelav-13 chapter 31 . 11/25
The history is very good and brilliant...!
More chapters please...!
| gusjo chapter 10 . 11/24
'Albus, what have you done.'
Flitwicks inner monologue is better than the fic overall so far, and thus doesn't really fit. It is a wonderful perpective on a time traveled Harry though.
| Azera-v chapter 27 . 9/11
Wish this got continued.
| gullu.ozcan75 chapter 6 . 9/6
On my way to school and smiling from ear to ear I absolutely love it
| gullu.ozcan75 chapter 2 . 9/6
Draco's reactions are the cutest
| CM chapter 31 . 8/27
Truly wonderful, original and engaging. Wishing you good health and that you have been able to continue writing. Thank you for sharing your gift.
| insane2599 chapter 31 . 8/17
I love what you’ve done with this story! I hope you will continue to write!
| Pandamega chapter 31 . 6/2
So so so good! I hope this gets continued! There are so many interesting sub plots and I just need to know what happens!
| Revliledpembroke chapter 18 . 5/6
Why does a 15 year old think an 11 year old is capable of... Well, anything really, but in particular "saving" Slytherin House?
Also... aww, those unfortunate rich, powerful Purebloods, stuck in a House no one but the most politically adept, wealthy, and an ient families like!
Seriously, what the hell is this waaaaaangst about it being so bad in Slytherin? Lucius has Fudge almost completely under his thumb, so clearly it isn't a crime for Slytherins to have money, powerful positions, or hang out with important people.
I'm really not a fan of this narrative about how Dumbledore and the school so mean that can't do anything but join the megalomaniacal terrorist with delusions of grandeur when there's a perfectly valid Ministry where many of their parents currently work!
It's like... It's like saying that all criminals exist solely because of the local government fucking up, and not because Joe Smith decided he wanted to rape some dude's wife one day and killed the husband, raped her next to her dead husband, and then murdered her too.
You're trying to excuse the inexcusable by making Slytherin House victims. Being a victim does not absolve you of wrongdoing. Like - a woman who was raped is justified in killing her rapist. But joining the Death Eaters is the equivalent of this hypothetical woman killing every single man she can.
| Revliledpembroke chapter 17 . 5/6
What's with this weird insistence that, since the Headmaster dislikes Slytherins (apparently), the poor (as in unfortunate, they likely quite rich) babies just *have* to side with a racist megalomaniac?
Couldn't they just do what they want, ignoring Dumbledore and *not* siding with the tyrannical lunatic? Like - there's totally a third option before Harry. Ignore both of them! Join the ministry and fight Voldemort that way!
It's like looking at the rich members KKK and going "Look! They just don't have any options! They *have* to side with the racist terrorists! Their Headmaster doesn't like them! And they totally can't join the local police forces to fight back against the terrorists - The Headmaster that has no problem with Lucius Malfoy running around bribing Cornelius Fudge whenever Lucius desires is wielding his influence over the Ministry to stop non-violent Southerners from joining the police."
They get good grades, and they get money, position, and influence by being old Purebloods. The fuck do they care about Dumbledore since he obviously isn't blocking those things? Like, they don't need to join Albus's Order of the Phoenix and the ministry is still fighting Voldemort, sooo... Join the ministry? Move to another country? Stay in your home and build elaborate traps and wards to protect yourself? Literally anything other than go "Yes, I too shall become Magical KKK."
That's the problem with a lot of these "evil Dumbledore" stories (and fanfic in general) - it very quickly falls apart with the slightest bit of pressure.
| ronjon chapter 16 . 4/30
I don,t remember dealing with Quirrill after Christmas, first year. When did Lockhart show up?
| mwinter1 chapter 31 . 4/29
Would love to have seen this finished all those years ago.
| jiromanawari chapter 31 . 4/29
reading this made me feel like I lost a couple of IQ points. That's how idiotic the whole story is
| Hater chapter 10 . 4/5
Hate a time travel fic where the character with all the foreknowledge forgets an important event or doesn't acknowledge the changing of time also changes how the other half of various relationships view you.