Reviews for Lord of the World
sneak13579 chapter 1 . 1/9
Please update!
Lone wolf aka Black Hawk Omega chapter 1 . 11/28/2015
Nice. I really like the idea. You should continue.
kage88 chapter 1 . 10/16/2015
interesting idea
toile grant chapter 1 . 10/10/2015
good
Seikishi-Kenshi chapter 1 . 10/7/2015
Continue?
Dan chapter 1 . 9/30/2015
Please continue l. Have a lemon soon
insanemaelstorm chapter 1 . 9/18/2015
Interesting prologue. So Naruto has recruited alvida and is going to recruit kuro. Damn. Also naruto is a very famous pirate. Can't wait to read more
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2015
Well this is an interesting story looking forward to the next chapter.
DareusX chapter 1 . 9/14/2015
I have a good feeling about this story. Can't wait for the next chapter :D
uzuuchi007 chapter 1 . 9/13/2015
Nice
Erazor djinn chapter 1 . 9/9/2015
Interesting fanfiction idea. Good luck in future updates. I am curious about who is in the harem?
Silver crow chapter 1 . 9/9/2015
Also I'm with the guy who said make it a massive harem and the guy who said add sandasora and I know I butcherd her name but while I do hope you add boa give her green sister a chance to
Silver crow chapter 1 . 9/9/2015
I'll be honest I want to see naruto be the Blackbeard of this story and I want to see him use the Yami Yami fruit and be the one that kills whitebeard in a epic battle ( even if whitebeard is one of my favourite charcters then again so is Blackbeard ) and I'm kinda hoping the thing that ruined Narutos first attempt at rising to the top was a temporary alliance of whitebeard and shanks and they worked together to beat him down and then the marines swept in and captured some of Narutos followers

Also I'm kinda hopeing you don't pair Luffy with anyone and keep his focus on eating as much as he can and being pirate king ( but again I hope naruto wins the race to be pirate king and stays as it )

So yeah that's pretty much it I'm intrested to see who you pair naruto with and I hope you replace Blackbeard with him and I hope we get an update real soon also this was a great first chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2015
supert
gamelover41592 chapter 1 . 9/10/2015
this has potential let's see where it goes
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