|Reviews for But You're Still Magic|
| Anarchy-Bell101 chapter 9 . 12/29/2013
This was an awesome story. Is it over? If not update soon:)
| MyNameisNothing chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
I respectfully disagree! Sometimes a lighter, more of a "greyish" tone in a dark story is necessary to keep the story moving until the big BOOM comes, so to speak. Like a brewing storm. The sky does not always just turn from day to night, the skies go grey first. It's a style of writing I personally enjoy. Such as also when you meet someone for the first time, you don't get inundated with their overall picture first. You first are met with just a sort of smooth surface, a baseline, an exterior. I feel the tone gets darker through the chapters, and the subtleties of the story give it a rounded finish without being obvious.
Mistaking occasional minimalism with lightness is an error in reader judgment as well.
I feel this is a wonderful story. I followed your work through your other websites as well. You're one of my favorite fan fiction writers and your work just gets better from here.
| Lzay-Niight chapter 7 . 6/28/2013
Cho my man!
Wasn't she Sasori's grandma?
| Lzay-Niight chapter 4 . 6/28/2013
I like and dislike this story.
Like: It's so hard to find GaaSasu who can write decently, and with a good plot.
Dislike: Gaara would have murdered his father in cold blood by now...which means he is very occ in here. Also, the situation seem so unrealistic at times, I can't really take this very seriously even when dealing with this topic (child abuse, rape).
Your story 'tone' is light, when it should be much darker. Also, Gaara emotions on the situation is a bit thin.
A few of the main ones he should be experiencing is; Anger (For the entire situation), Hurt (By his Dad), Confusion (From Kakashi - mixed emotions), Hopelessness (Entire situation), Humiliation (From Rape).
But knowing Gaara, he would probably bottled this all up into he finally just exploded in a fit of rage.
| Mayonaka-chan chapter 9 . 8/7/2011
I know you don't particularly want reviews but I just wanted you to know that your stories are absolutely amazing! I find them very inspiring and I hope you keep it up
| silverroses66 chapter 9 . 7/19/2011
It was woo sad, i cried. But the ending was adorable. Loved everything about it
| MyFirelightDreams chapter 9 . 4/13/2011
I think I'm in love.
With the story.
*grins* I want an update, Kitteh. x333 Please? :3
/You're/ still magic.
| GotCinnamonPunkC13 chapter 9 . 4/3/2011
THAT WAS AMAZING.
You...you should replace Hollywood and make something wonderful because your amazing and you are AWESOME.
I liked your story (hehe)
| Barbasulrico chapter 9 . 4/2/2011
Yay! Happy ending! What happened to Kakashi? O.o
This fic was perfect by the way! I liked the way of wrighting, the structure and that everything that happened. XD
Keep it up!
| KagamineP.C chapter 8 . 3/19/2011
what the hell?
| lovelikecrazyy chapter 8 . 3/15/2011
You cannot be serious. Its very cruel to end it there. I swear I'm going to be thinking about it until the next chapter is posted, and I hope that is soon!
| Barbasulrico chapter 8 . 3/15/2011
NOT OKAY! You can't end with a cliff hanger! .
Thats like pure evil! DX
| Barbasulrico chapter 7 . 3/10/2011
Wow, an unexpected turn. I like it, is Gaara gonna move in with her now? XD
| Barbasulrico chapter 6 . 3/4/2011
It was AWSOME! I love it an it's so unexpecteble to se Gaara as seme! XD
Keep up the good work and uppdate soon.
| 3ntitylvr chapter 5 . 12/27/2010
this is adorable chapter and a totally hot story...as well as painfully depressing and a good night time reading for me...i am sooo weird XD i love how long the last chapter was and everything that went on it and i would've written a review but i was really anxious to read this chapter. see i usually leave reviews every chapter unless i am unbelievably into the story and just forget about tht little button at the bottom! hope to see more soon!