|Reviews for Cry of the Dragon|
| Boomerang Fish chapter 2 . 10/22/2009
Another Icemark fanfic! Fantastical!
You've got a good idea and it has lots of potential. There are just a few grammatical errors/missed words - they weren't that big, though, and didn't make it that hard to read. Proofreading would fix them.
I'm looking forward to chapter 3 :)
| Margarett chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
This story has a lot of potential to be really good.
I hope that it will be as good as I imagine. Its a good opening chapter