|Reviews for Static|
| moodymel chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
Very nice. Kinda obsessive, just the way I like it. Only problem, it was too short, I want more. Great job!
| fan.writer.in.disguise chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
| vesperlynds chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
I really enjoyed this. The last section was just perfect.
| The Eclectic Eccentric chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
I've read this and your other GI Joe fic, and I love them both.
I wish you would write a longer fic centering around James and Ana... just because I adore your writing.
Anyways...keep up the good work.
| Mark R. Whitten chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
Excellent! I like this story idea, and its well written. Couple things though: I think its called telepresence, not holocom, although that's good too. And I think that it would be better if you put the last sentence alone at the bottom of the page, so it has more impact.