|Reviews for Silence|
| youngwriter123 chapter 1 . 6h ago
I never thought I'd find a really different, interesting story for L and Light tonight but I did! YES! Wow, okay lemme just say that your writing is very clear and just a joy to read.
Light's point of view and thoughts are enticing and keep with his character. And I really like that you got into his head and explained everything in such detail. It's believable to imagine the things he thinks and why he thinks them. Most fanfics will skip over those types of details and go straight to the romance or smut but it's great(no, amazing) that you didn't!
I like that L didn't get much of a part in this chapter. I guess it's because I'm afraid of romance/smut cutting right into the story but it's interesting. I can't wait to see what will happen with them in the next chapter :)
I can go on forever about little things that I like in this story so far but I won't since you'd fall asleep x)
Anyway, keep it up! I can't WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER! 3
| Guest chapter 23 . 3/12
fuck I'd kill for another chapter, nay, another paragraph of this fic! you are an outstanding writer, and for death note in particular. I hope you will return one day
| unheardcries chapter 23 . 12/27/2013
Wow, so good!
| soruen chapter 23 . 12/17/2013
First, I will like to express my love for this story. It was amazing, well written, realistic (for a fanfic anyway) and absolutely brilliant storyline (there's a plot!)
Now, I'll need to confess I'm not a L/Light fan :p
I mean, I'm not anti-slash or anything, and its seriously impossible to read a death note ff without seeing L/Light, but I get severely bugged by the L/Light contents every time I read them.
However your story didn't have too much of that, but enough for us readers to feel the emotions between L/Light. I love the way that you portray them, how there are all these very real issues these two need to face to be together, instead of love being to solution to everything. And the fact its not just fluff all the way is another bonus. (There's only so much L/Light content I can handle before I tire of it..)
Also! I absolutely love the B/Light interaction! (Oops) I have no idea why but I always enjoy seeing interactions between characters that dont interact in canon. Seeing Light with Matt was good too, although (in my opinion) not enough with Mello. I'm a fan of rare pairing so (sadly?) my favorite part of this story is the B/Light eloping(?) part (haha). I love your crazy Light too, kind of sad now that he's returning to normal.
Hope you update soon! I'm assuming there will still be updates, since your status is not set to complete. And that the Yagami father and son will get a reunion.
| Fury of the Flames chapter 23 . 11/16/2013
Okay, first of all...I was half awake this morning when I was paging through the frightening pile of DN fanfic when I happened to remember this story and searched for it. Very few things make me ecstatic at this hour, but discovering that you had updated some time back was both glorious and bittersweet. OMG, I've waited so long for this! This is one of those few stories that has held me captive for some time, and I've been in awe as to how you've managed to portray both L and Light in ways that will have me hanging onto the possibility of another update in the future.
| Junoa chapter 23 . 11/6/2013
Hello there. *shy smile?*
I just finished reading both Asylum and Silence and I just want to tell you that I have loved every minute of it. :)
I am really happy that Light and L finally got eachother in the end (if it really IS the end), but it just makes me crave more. And more, and more and more! Haha!
I am sorry to hear about your "health" and I hope you are feeling better and more creative again.
I am also very impressed with you for finishing your stories and being very open and friendly with your "fans".
(I NEVER manages to finish anything I write... always get a writers-block halfway through and then my interest is caught by something else and the story falls into the great abyss of 'unfinished business'. I am SO gonna return as a ghost thanks to all my unfinished business...)
IS there more to this story, or is it an open ending kinda deal? Now don't start killing off baby animals in your frustration with me, cause I really like the story and I'm totally fine with an ending like this! *hands up in defense* I'm just curious since it didn't have the tag "completed". ;)
And for my final note in this long ass review
I have found music that really fits in with this story AND I have found a picture of the perfect guy to "play" B if they would ever make a movie out of this delightful story. ;)
I am gonna link the music as YouTube video. Hope that's ok and that you don't think I am completely out ofmy mind...
Superchick - Beauty from Pain
Superchick - Stand in the Rain
(I can only think of the last episode of the anime where L is alive... Makes me cry every time... Why did they kill him!? Light even showed a sliver of compassion for the poor guy as he wiped water off his forehead...) *cries a little*
Character for B:
Birkett Turton as Paul Morlock in Stephen King's Kingdom Hospital. ;) He's perfect! haha!
I really loved this story (cried through a lot of it... LOVEd crazy Light!)
Love love love! and Peace. ;)
Keep up the good work! cheers!
| Toolazytologin chapter 9 . 10/7/2013
Yah, i give up... There's a lot of bxlight... And i'm not here for that, i started reading this because its Lxlight now i regret it... Really, a warning should have been place there...
| silverwings1986 chapter 23 . 10/1/2013
I'm so glad you are back and hope you are doing well
| Kitkat3195 chapter 23 . 9/26/2013
I love this fiction and it's prequel as well! Thankyou so mich for writing this! I look forward to the next chapter! *hugs*
| ChetUnGwan chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
I really like this so far, and loved it's predecessor, but one quick question. Did you chose the name Crowley because you've watched Supernatural or read Good Omens? If not, then you should. It gives the whole thing a layer of irony. In fact, a whole new fanfiction could be written off of your fanfiction and one of those.
| Anon chapter 23 . 9/19/2013
Oi. If I didn't read your A/N I'd be screaming. Ah, well.
Thanks for writing this-you are a really, really good writer. I'm pretty blown away with every chapter. Now it's away with me to the nearest library for our century's lousy literature.
| Tai Black chapter 23 . 9/4/2013
| machi-pan chapter 23 . 8/28/2013
this is the most emotional fanfic I have ever read, and that means that it's two things for me; something extremely unhealthy and probably THE BEST THING I HAVE READ IN...JUST THE BEST THING I'VE READ, EVER! You're such an amazing author how-h-how what-what are you doing on a site like this?! Not that I'm complaining or anything. WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME? SOBBING MY GUTS OUT! Poor Light Dx but even more on that note, POOR L! ! ! AAAAAAAUUUUUUGHHHHHHHHHHHHJHH SCREAMS
| soulwriter51 chapter 23 . 8/28/2013
| NearInsanity96 chapter 23 . 8/6/2013
;A; this is so amazing. I love this story so much! I can't wait for the next update, but don't push yourself too hard!