Reviews for The Secret
neexxal chapter 1 . 4/25
it's was good in the beginning but got worst as story progress
Disappointed chapter 41 . 7/29/2017
I really enjoyed this story... Up until this chapter. I honestly can't continue with this rapey, abusive story that had well-developed characters up until this point. The thought of this story beyond this chapter makes me gag. Please consider in future putting a warning in for people who have been in abusive relationships. Very disappointed.
Zanie ibuz chapter 10 . 6/18/2017
Very nyc ov u
Guest chapter 2 . 5/14/2017
Oh craps...lol
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2017
Edward...what are you up to...
orchidluv chapter 55 . 4/29/2017
Awesome!
orchidluv chapter 48 . 4/29/2017
I really love the plot of this story. I've never read something quite like this before. Brava!
orchidluv chapter 25 . 4/28/2017
If it were me getting glared at, I'd just cross my eyes at em. lol
orchidluv chapter 22 . 4/28/2017
I love how they say each other's names so often, like they just love the way it sounds on their lips. So romantic.
orchidluv chapter 18 . 4/28/2017
I really love how yours attaching phrases and sentences from the movie/book. It helps keep his facial expressions and hers in my brain!
orchidluv chapter 14 . 4/28/2017
Her flirting is way better in this story than the books and movie haha
orchidluv chapter 12 . 4/27/2017
lmao man panties and douchebagginess!
orchidluv chapter 1 . 4/27/2017
I like how Alice only gives bits away instead of every little detail. It makes sense because her visions are decision based.
orchidluv chapter 1 . 4/27/2017
Haha omg these two are priceless!
ladymagna1100 chapter 54 . 7/19/2016
This was an interesting take on the Twilight story and I liked it enough that I plan on checking out the sequel.
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