Reviews for Absolution's Pursuit |
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ChaoticReverie chapter 11 . 4/9/2010 I like it too. It's so beautifully written. Nothing seems odd or out of place or awkward... very, very lovely flow. This is officially one of my favorite stories, and I'm so anxious for your next update. At the moment I'm rather pregnant, and can't do overly much in regards to 'getting out'. So, I find myself indoors, playing with my daughter and (while she's napping) indulging in the wonderful world of fandom. It's stories like yours that get me excited about sitting on my butt in front of my computer. :P I swear, every time you post a new story they get better and better. Sigh... I wish that I improved that quickly. Keep up the fantastic work. |
Amputation chapter 11 . 4/6/2010 Interesting story, remarkable OC characters and plot. I truely do enjoy this. Please update soon. - Amputation |
Scherherazade chapter 11 . 4/1/2010 Nice chapter. Oshiikame is a very likable character. It was clever to use her to show us what Sesshoumaru is like on inside. Sort of giving us a glimpse into his head. I'm glad he feels guilty for what I'm assuming is Inuyasha's guilt. He probably should. However, from what I recall from previous chapters I get the feeling he didn't really expect things to happen the way the did. Almost like he didn't think Inuyasha would actually die, as foolish as that may seem. Of course I could be overanalyzing, I tend to do that, lol. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
Creature of Shadow chapter 11 . 4/1/2010 Ah! Great chapter! I thoroughly enjoyed this. And to who ever was picking at the name you chose, I will return the favor and start biting ankles! It's your story, you do what you want! And I think it's a great name. Ahem... Anyway, I really can't wait for the next update, this story is definitely going to be one of the greats and it shows that you are enjoying writing it as well. This lowly Creature bows humbly before Mistress Sianna once again, and asks for a speedy update. I will be waiting somewhat patiently! ;D CoS |
Gothic Lust chapter 11 . 3/31/2010 I like it too, a lot! I hope that you will update soon! -Gothic Lust |
Kagome357 chapter 11 . 3/31/2010 First of all, thank you for updating. This is truly one of the more unique stories online right now. Before I go any further, I wanted to address your A/N regarding the name you chose. I honestly hate it when scabbers take issues with something as small as that and then do so in your review instead of sending it to you in a PM. It was even more cowardly to do so anonymously. I had someone do that with me and I let her know that I chose my choice of word because I like it and it wasn't that serious of an issue. If you're gonna review a story, review the story. To nitpick over a name choice is disrespectful and a silly waste of time. Kanji words can carry so many different meanings when added to other words but I guess she didn't think of that. How simple and one dimensional. It makes me wanna holla sometimes... N-E-WAY...I love how Oshiikame was able to see so deeply inside of him, not just reading his arrogance but how he really felt. Hopefully, he'll be able to reach down and pull that little feeling out and explore it. Poor Kags...she still doesn't know, huh? I wonder how she'll react. Again, great story! Kags357 |
1kenshinlover chapter 11 . 3/31/2010 I really like this story too. I wonder in what way he's going to gain absolution. Can't wait until the next update. |
Hu5kyGirl chapter 1 . 3/31/2010 Wow! Totally lOVE this opening chapter, so fresh and Inventive! |
kittykritik chapter 11 . 3/31/2010 I've enjoyed this story greatly so far. I think it is a nice twist to the original storyline. There origin of demons and DaiGin's line is a great touch, and even the part about Kagome coming back too late instead of how it ended in the anime. I thought that was very smart. Great work and I'll look forward to the next one. mew... |
Blueberry Babe chapter 11 . 3/31/2010 Very nice chapter. thanks.. I liked the revelations to sesshy's personality.. |
Doll-Fin-Chick chapter 11 . 3/31/2010 Aww! So, is Sesshy gonna tell her? I bet Kagome would be sympathetic too DFC |
Scherherazade chapter 10 . 3/18/2010 I'm so sad that you are going to stop writing. You are so good at it. Good chapter...a giant tortoise, I expected it to a bit smaller for some reason. Looking forward to the next one. |
JordenMichelle chapter 10 . 3/13/2010 This is such a wonderful story. I cannot wait for the next chapter and I hope that you don't stop writing - you have a gift for it, and I have adored every story that you have written. Again it's fantastic! Cheers. |
1kenshinlover chapter 10 . 3/10/2010 I'm sorry to hear that you're retiring from writing because I really enjoy reading your stories. It's hard to find a lot of good fan fiction writers. I know it's kinda silly to be picky, but yours is one of the ones I really enjoy. Anyway, I am glad that you're going to finish your stories. They always keep me on the edge of my seat wondering and trying to guess what's going to happen next. Like reading a really good book. Anyway, can't wait until the next update. |
Creature of Shadow chapter 10 . 3/9/2010 I liked this chapter. It was kind of sad, but the detail was great. I think it's good Kagome got some closer with Inu as well. I am also sad to hear you are retiring after these fic are complete. I love your writing so it kind of stinks that these are the last. Can't wait for the next update for this though, and I hope to see something for Remnants as well! CoS |