Reviews for Better in the Dark
rowenasheir chapter 17 . 7/9/2015
SS very OCC in the last sentence!
Arathelia chapter 8 . 2/6/2015
Though I'm immensely enjoying this story, seriously, I love the plot you have going, as well as the execution, but I'm a bit confused by this chapter. I mean, Harry said earlier that both Luna and Neville were trusted true day, but then in this chapter he keeps me ruining having no friends but his new Slytherin ones. (Not counting the talk with the Headmaster either, because obviously he wouldn't admit to knowing those two /there/.)
Aren't they still his friends? He may not be able to be seen with Neville, as he is a Gryffindor, but he could probably at least still see Luna occasionally. Ravenclaws seem to be able to get along with the snake house, and everyone has already decided Luna is decidedly odd, so it wouldn't be a surprise to see her with someone unexpected.

And as to Citren (who is absolutely adorable!), students /are/ allowed pets/familiars, and it is never really touched on about what the pets are allowed to do or where they are allowed to be, so I think it might actually be acceptable, or at the very least not truly breaking a rule, if the cat were to go with him everywhere.
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