|Reviews for Better in the Dark|
| Ace Trainer Jessie chapter 5 . 12/20/2009
whoa! kick ass!
| SnapeAngel chapter 2 . 12/20/2009
for teh harry slash pairing..draco..or anyone else his own age..but draco is a good match
as hot as lucius is...he is older than HIS FATHER! really now..that's just wrong!
thanks for saying how to say his name, i had NO clue
great story so far
on to 3!
| TOFTS chapter 5 . 12/20/2009
| Moonlight Harmony chapter 5 . 12/19/2009
It's really great so far, can i ask where you came up with the names? Citren and Ciaran? sorry if i spelled either one of them wrong. It's really great! plz update soon, im looking forward to the next chapter.
p.s. is the mystery person either remus or sirius?
| sarah999 chapter 5 . 12/17/2009
I love it. I hope it's Charlie that got picked for Harry's boyfriend/mate/whatever you're calling him.
| vairetwilight chapter 5 . 12/9/2009
Great work I love this story so far. Its an interesting interpretation of the snape as harrys father story. As for who the stranger was at the end i'm guessing Charlie and on that note I really hope this is a HarryCharlie pairing though of course i'll keep reading anyway. :D Can't wait for more.
| Aisling-Siobhan chapter 5 . 12/8/2009
i like it so far. is the stranger Charlie? and please let the pairing be Lucius/Harry? :P
| Zeppie chapter 5 . 12/8/2009
Great story !
Hope that Harry ends up with Charlie It seems like that would happen with the way you described him in the other chapter :)
Cant wait for the next update
| lifedotcalm chapter 5 . 12/8/2009
very intriguing story
definately got me hooked!
very different from others i have read
and in Like... a lot
awesome writing... especially like how you
write the dysfunctional family but still
seem to have comfort for Ciaran (by the way nice name) ...
hope it gets better
can't wait to see what you have planned for the
rest of the story and the person you
chose to be with Ciaran !
till nex time,
| silverharpie17 chapter 5 . 12/7/2009
OMG OMG OMG OMFG! What happens? who is the stanger? Keep going and UPDATE! love the story!
| Sweet-single chapter 5 . 12/7/2009
| TLD110166 chapter 5 . 12/7/2009
I love what you did with the Dursley family! A slight spelling error, though. You have paid spelled payed.
| jimmy-barnes-13 chapter 5 . 12/5/2009
Really fantastic story, I am simply loving it. Cannot wait to find out the pairing :) Update asap!
| Hendrick248848 chapter 5 . 11/28/2009
love the story but want Charlie/harry!
| Hendrick248848 chapter 4 . 11/28/2009