Reviews for Better in the Dark
lifedotcalm chapter 5 . 12/8/2009
very intriguing story

definately got me hooked!

very different from others i have read

and in Like... a lot

awesome writing... especially like how you

write the dysfunctional family but still

seem to have comfort for Ciaran (by the way nice name) ...

hope it gets better

can't wait to see what you have planned for the

rest of the story and the person you

chose to be with Ciaran !

gold star

till nex time,

silverharpie17 chapter 5 . 12/7/2009
OMG OMG OMG OMFG! What happens? who is the stanger? Keep going and UPDATE! love the story!
Sweet-single chapter 5 . 12/7/2009

update soon!
TLD110166 chapter 5 . 12/7/2009
I love what you did with the Dursley family! A slight spelling error, though. You have paid spelled payed.
jimmy-barnes-13 chapter 5 . 12/5/2009
Really fantastic story, I am simply loving it. Cannot wait to find out the pairing :) Update asap!
Hendrick248848 chapter 5 . 11/28/2009
love the story but want Charlie/harry!
Hendrick248848 chapter 4 . 11/28/2009
Hendrick248848 chapter 3 . 11/28/2009
Charlie/Harry or what bout Charlie/Harry/Lucis
Hendrick248848 chapter 2 . 11/28/2009
love the story so far can't wait for chapter 6 what bout for pairing Harry/Charlie
safa56bmc chapter 5 . 11/27/2009

im hooked up..what next...plz let lupin join..plz let it be charlie to be with ahrry..plz plz plz
itachisgurl93 chapter 5 . 11/26/2009
luv ur stori! very interesting...i say itz charile! i hope u update soon!
Lady Laran chapter 5 . 11/26/2009
I like the story so far and am interested in who you're going to pair him with.
DesertRoseFallen chapter 5 . 11/25/2009
Mystery person Charlie? I cannot wait to see who you have decided for him to be with. I love how this chapter panned out, especially the emotions coming from Harry and Severus not knowing how to deal with him. Please update soon!
mrscakeakajane chapter 5 . 11/25/2009
wow totaly wonderfull story. don't let Severus get punished too much, how about getting Harry to stop Marvolo protecting his father.

so who is the stranger.

please update soon
the dark euphie chapter 5 . 11/24/2009
good story dude/ette! it's charlie isn't it. good choice i'd of gone with draco though. update soon please.
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