Reviews for Bad Day
Tsukiko K chapter 2 . 9/28/2017
I was thinking... what if all of those kids(including those despicable girls and the other boys, not just the three who had picked on Ed) caught Ed on a better day, when he was walking normally and not using crutches and instead of blowing up on them, he uses Alchemy and martial arts and states that they had no idea what he'd been through. Really, if all you do is judge someone like Ed without knowing the details, you'll probably feel a world of guilt if you found out anything. I can just imagine him now. "So you think I'm nothing but a worthless cripple. And yet you've never experienced the agony of losing limbs, of being impaled, or kidnapped. You've never been tortured or beaten or sent to the hospital for severe injuries. And yet you think you're better than me?"
LeChick chapter 2 . 8/31/2017
Fluffy but believable fluff! Too cute
manga.geek.3 chapter 2 . 11/11/2016
Man, I was really wishing this story was longer than 2 chapter's. The idea, while used by lots of people, was well written by you. The character's were spot on. :D Good job! Loved this very much
Guest chapter 2 . 10/23/2016
It's really hard for an author to make you feel emotionally like you're in the world he/she describes, and the setting it self is rarely depicted with amazing detail but not a monologue on it. This touching fic did both and I think this is one of the best Fics out there.
Mischief Tea chapter 2 . 8/22/2016
also known as: these dorks and why we love them. :)

Thanks for sharing! I enjoyed that quite thoroughly.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/12/2016
Wow. This was really good, the dialogue was honest and everyone was in character. It's also really relatable.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/25/2015
It's so fluffy :D
Guest chapter 1 . 12/25/2015
I have the biggest girl crush on Riza. That damn gun is a big reason why.
MarkOfAlitheia chapter 2 . 12/22/2015
Wow. That was a truly EPIC bad day, and it was super realistic. I could totally see that happening to him, and his reaction made complete sense. Great job!
Leemix chapter 2 . 10/22/2015
Ah, Edward. We've all experienced absolute crudmuffins like that in times of our lives.

The only word that comes to mind for this is "sweet". I am always a fan of the Parental!RoyEd scenario, and to me, this encapsulated it to utter perfection. I have to admit, I thought in the second chapter Roy would relay some information about being raised by his Aunt, but I was surprised at the direction this turn. Not a bad one, but unexpected. The emotions felt real, and it was lovely to read.

Kudos to you, my friend.
That Ishvalan Kid chapter 2 . 8/15/2015
Can I just say Thank you? I've been bullied lately for being the "Fat kid" and this really lifted my spirits and made me feel better.
Also that description of how annoying crutches are was spot-on.
Keep writing, I loved this.
Lacila chapter 2 . 5/1/2014
The fluff...oh the Roy and Ed fluff was so cute. I honestly was on the verge of crying. I swear whenever I read stories like this I feel this pang; physical pang; of sadness. Like its rigging your heart with so much sadness that it "tightens".
EmiEmi96 chapter 2 . 4/15/2014
That ending though XD
EmiEmi96 chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
Awww, poor Ed :O I feel really sorry for him now ;(
MemoriesOfVoxei chapter 2 . 2/23/2014
Wow... Just wow! Really, this two-shot is incredible! It's like a complete evolution of the relationship between Roy end Ed, and I personally find it was formidably well-shown in all of your writing. And it's cool how even though their respect for each other have grown a lot, they still keep their usual words fight, though seemingly with more care and more considered and loveable teasing rather than bully teasing! I mean, Roy does look intimidating, doesn't he? xD

Anyway, that was a really good fic and I assure you that I enjoyed it a lot!
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