|Reviews for Boston|
| SHULESLOVER2000 chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
DAMN IT INEED TO STOP READING THINGS THAT MAKE ME CRY...nice job though
| R1U2 chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Boston is awesome but love it
| Psychic101 chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
What is this somg called and you need to add another chapter...
| Anonymus chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
I must say, Jules if very OOC, but I still enjoyed the story ;)
| Sparrows Magician chapter 1 . 10/27/2009
Ok so I honestly believe that this story had amazing potential, but your delivery was less then satisfactory. The beginning seemed a little off because one minute he is with Gus the next he is across town with Juliet? She's crying, then shes angry, then she is alright with Shaun. They seemed to have a weird vibe, also the insert of Abigail seemed really off as well. They could have had a little more interaction and where Shaun's thoughts drifted to Juliet. I also think you could have put more thought in their meeting, had a little verbal fight, and ultimately Shaun letting her go with a fleeting glance. You could have gone back and made the story more smooth, feeling the flow of Shaun's feelings of the reality of losing Juliet.
I agree that this song was perfect for Psych, and having an angsty Shaun miss Juliet was a great plot, but I think you just wanted to include a lot, instead of include a little with good quality and through thought process.
| Mikeyjoe512 chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
| Paris-Never-Ended22 chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
love it. you did a great job.
| fieryhairedmaiden chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
good story... sad ending