|Reviews for What If|
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/20/2015
but if you're readers can't read it you can't make it happen *snickers*
| sweet little cookie chapter 14 . 9/3/2015
Please update your story. I really like it :) :(
| AW27 chapter 14 . 9/3/2013
Can't wait for the next chapter. This is awesome. :)
Good Luck Frau!
| Mangaanimea113 chapter 14 . 7/31/2013
Nooooo I need more!
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
I LIKE THIS STORY I AM A HUGE AYANAMI AND TEITO SUPPORTER
| lady devil darkness chapter 14 . 2/15/2013
please don't stop it's good and some whon els will make it so diffrent so don't stop writting please
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/9/2013
good, enjoyable story but needs more beta-ing/proof reading/SOMETHING please please please! So I can read it and enjoy it without getting all baffled
example in your chapter description: "Updated every once a week" should be once a week or every week, not both.
also, why does teito not hate ayanami? did I miss something in the manga/anime?
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Good, I like it so far. A little awkward with the syntax/grammar but that doesn't detract from the story too much...more beta-ing would probably fix it more or less...mwa ha
| anonymouse chapter 14 . 1/19/2013
oh man did you intentionaly made teito bestow such a punishment oh god that was hilarious
| MidnightSinXOXOXO chapter 14 . 12/5/2012
I really luv this fanfiction, so why are you putting it up for adoption? It's a really good fanfiction for 07-Ghost. Please continue to update unless you've alreay dropped it :(. Good-luck
| MidnightSinXOXOXO chapter 12 . 12/5/2012
Is Teito an angel now?
| MidnightSinXOXOXO chapter 7 . 12/5/2012
NO! I luv the sex/punishment scenes...
| Rhea-LOCKWING chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
You know, a story wouldn't be the same if there is a different writer continues especially one that had progressed this far. It's a good story and you really should keep writing.
| Soul Vrazy chapter 14 . 9/26/2012
Interesting story but why you left it for adopt?
| VhynaSiiSemelekete chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
The first time I read this story, I feel I can't stop loving this story. You are doing great job!
If you don't mind, could you continue this story?