Reviews for On Top
winterkaguya chapter 1 . 1/26
My kinda Narusasu! And that little girl is really smart! She should've asked for fifty! Expect nothing less from you when it comes to Narusasu! Love how the uke takes control! hahaha! great job!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/7/2016
No link? I'm sadly not imaginative enough...siigh
NotJustAGirlJustMe chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
You're one of the few authors left who still make me blush. Wow.
godess bubbles chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
Man did Sasuke dirty talk!
emily-kite-tenjo chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
This was so awesome ! * becomes a puddle of goo*
pampoo chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
The last scene was hilarious!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
SenkeiTsukiyomi chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
good sex scene, though I think the cat would have been more confortable. I have to admit I had some trouble understanding their position, I didn't imagine Naruto could be so "bendy"
jjavatar6 chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Totally epic! Just soo ** awesome
Kazuomi chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
That was something Hot !
I really Like what you're writing .. been your fan for years X) !
Your lemons are the Best ;D !
LyRiCho chapter 1 . 2/13/2012

I love it...

Love everything about it... Your the best!
lolitawork libretto chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
Holy fucking shit. I have read a LOT of smut. But THAT, by far, is one of the best. Oh my goshhh. You, sir, have talent. The porn industry needs you.

Hikaru SD chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
I jizzed... Anyways, this was like REALLY hot! O.O (as you can tell by my first statement)

Nothing else i can say. Btw, i was completely able to see the position they were in... Does this mean i'm corrupted enough? I feel like i need to be corrupted even moar :3
MyLiloITAChIassasin chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
hmmmmm... interesting!
hgjasdf chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
funny! short and definitely hot.
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