|Reviews for On Top|
| emily-kite-tenjo chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
This was so awesome ! * becomes a puddle of goo*
| pampoo chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
The last scene was hilarious!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
| SenkeiTsukiyomi chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
good sex scene, though I think the cat would have been more confortable. I have to admit I had some trouble understanding their position, I didn't imagine Naruto could be so "bendy"
| jjavatar6 chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Totally epic! Just soo ** awesome
| Kazuomi chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
That was something Hot !
I really Like what you're writing .. been your fan for years X) !
Your lemons are the Best ;D !
| LyRiCho chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
I love it...
Love everything about it... Your the best!
| lolitawork libretto chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
Holy fucking shit. I have read a LOT of smut. But THAT, by far, is one of the best. Oh my goshhh. You, sir, have talent. The porn industry needs you.
| BoyGagaloo - Hikaru chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
I jizzed... Anyways, this was like REALLY hot! O.O (as you can tell by my first statement)
Nothing else i can say. Btw, i was completely able to see the position they were in... Does this mean i'm corrupted enough? I feel like i need to be corrupted even moar :3
| MyLiloITAChIassasin chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
| jaetime chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
funny! short and definitely hot.
| Narue-Nara-chan chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Good idea of position! (Though poor Naruto should be in a lot of pain afterwards... The back isn't made to bend that much... I think?)
Thanks for the fic!
| ms.Clair K Ookami chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Good job, I think (most likly wrong though) Narutos on the toilet and Sasukes ride-ing him, right?
| Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
That was excellent and amusing...especially at the end, I loved it and awesome job
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Hey. I just wanted to let you know that I started reading your work at about 12am. It is now currently 2am, and I have read 13 of your stories, and immensely enjoyed 11 of them. The only wish I have, is for another chapter after I finish. I made an account just to tell you this, I don't write myself. I haven't read this particular one yet, "On Top", but I am about to. I just wanted to let you know before I pass out at my computer, hah. You are seriously making me think about my favorite authors right now. I have my ultimate favorite story, but you just may surpass the author of that story. For one reason, you actually finish your work. For another reason, you have more then one story. And for the final reason, I (think) you are still active in writing, in May 2k11. I hope so, I would love to read more from you.