Reviews for On Top
godess bubbles chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
Man did Sasuke dirty talk!
emily-kite-tenjo chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
This was so awesome ! * becomes a puddle of goo*
pampoo chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
The last scene was hilarious!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
frhruau
SenkeiTsukiyomi chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
good sex scene, though I think the cat would have been more confortable. I have to admit I had some trouble understanding their position, I didn't imagine Naruto could be so "bendy"
jjavatar6 chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Totally epic! Just soo ** awesome
Kazuomi chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
That was something Hot !
I really Like what you're writing .. been your fan for years X) !
Your lemons are the Best ;D !
LyRiCho chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
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I love it...

Love everything about it... Your the best!
lolitawork libretto chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
Holy fucking shit. I have read a LOT of smut. But THAT, by far, is one of the best. Oh my goshhh. You, sir, have talent. The porn industry needs you.

Omg.
Hikaru SD chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
I jizzed... Anyways, this was like REALLY hot! O.O (as you can tell by my first statement)

Nothing else i can say. Btw, i was completely able to see the position they were in... Does this mean i'm corrupted enough? I feel like i need to be corrupted even moar :3
MyLiloITAChIassasin chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
hmmmmm... interesting!
hgjasdf chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
funny! short and definitely hot.
Narue-Nara-chan chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
Good idea of position! (Though poor Naruto should be in a lot of pain afterwards... The back isn't made to bend that much... I think?)

Thanks for the fic!
ms.Clair K Ookami chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Good job, I think (most likly wrong though) Narutos on the toilet and Sasukes ride-ing him, right?
Pheonix09 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
That was excellent and amusing...especially at the end, I loved it and awesome job
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