Reviews for Heartbeat
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
That was beautiful absolutly beautiful. Brava.
BeautifulPieces chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
"Who?" He asks, before lowering his face to hers, his hands still cupping her face.

She smiles, his mouth pressed against hers, because maybe, just this once, she gets to have the happy ending she's always wanted.

Aw so one-shot
tasha27 chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
Oh. My. God.

This was heartbreaking...

I loved this so much!

Honestly, up until i saw New Moon lastweekend i HATED jacob...and i didnt much care for any of the werewolves..and then, i fell in love with Jacob in the movie..not just because Taylor Lautner is hot, but because he seemed nicer than in the books..and just the way he begged Bella to stay i melted right there.

This is probably the only twilight fic on my faves because i only read HP james/lily fanfics, but this is well deserved and i am utterly speechless.

I never gave much thought to leah and now you made me feel sorry for her. I think i'll have to go back and re-read the whole series and see it all from a different point of view.

Diane Langley chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
Ah... Such a happy thought. :) A well-written, very enjoyable piece!
neverassume chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
too cute! i loved it! 3
MusicalHearts-xxx chapter 1 . 10/24/2009
Aw! See what you did, you've got me wanting Jacob and Leah together now! Couple names:



I am reviewing loads of your stories atm cos your twilight and skins one-shots are really good.

Blackwater Fan chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
Oh if Stephenie Meyer had only given us this instead of Jacob and the demon spawn.

Brilliant and beautiful!
Luci-Marlena chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
aw that was cute

"Who?" and then he kisses her... nice

brankel1 chapter 1 . 10/22/2009
Awesome job.
TheVividTruth chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
This was amazing.

I loved how you wrote about their feelings for each other and the anger and heart break that was expirenced.

Awesome work.
Jacobleah chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
So good. You captured all her angst, hurt, fear and heartbreak. It was so hard to tell how it was going to end

but this is the way it should have ended. Thanks.
Dawn Run chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
hee hee hee!


Me likes. A LOT. :)

nice one!
hilja chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
Wow! This was great. I love happy endings for Blackwater fics.
ZuXy.Q chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
blackwater goodness. loved it.i really wished they had ended up together