|Reviews for Slipped Away|
| Miss Rune chapter 2 . 6/18/2013
Smiles4Life you magnificent person! I agree completely with what you're saying!
| Queen Jane Approx chapter 2 . 4/21/2013
Oh, the butthurt. Reported for non-story.
| Dantelover051386 chapter 1 . 4/11/2012
Damn, that was good writing. sad, but a great story.
Hmm...this hits home. er...the cheating that is for me. I was once in a relationship...er...in my case abusive, but he cheated on me left and right. I forgave..he cheated..I forgave...he cheated and so on for over 5 years. we had a child under five as well so you can see why it hit home for me. i to walked into my home and witness him fucking another, but on our couch and as I scanned the room I could see other places they obivously fucked as well. infront of the fire place, the kitchen counter and table. used condoms everywhere as well and all the while our child was sleeping in another room. he even placed a chair against the door so our child couldnt disturb them. yea, I know. I was FURIOUS. needless to say I left him, there was no divorce since we werent married, but I left and took our child. My family was disgusted with him and backed me fully, much like this story. he threatened me for custody, but lost. the I hated taking him away from his child, but there comes a time when you have to think of the child. whats better for them and seeing there parent whoring around without remorse for those that they hurt...yea, I had no issue with removing him from our childs life.
I cannot blame or fault edward for leaving bella and getting full custody. bella deserved loosing everything she lost. she didnt deserve edward or her child. I feel for the child, but one day said child will know that its mother picked whoring around over being with them, being with her husband.
said that, I loved the story. I really try not to read to angsty stories especially when it envolves cheating, but it was good and I was proud of edward for shit kicking her to the curb.
| I hate angst chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
I LOVE YOU! (okay I know it sounds weird, you don't know me).
But really it feels so good to know that there is someone who hates Bella as much as I do. This story is not OOC at all. Bella is a slut/whore/prostitute/skank (sorry for the bad words but some one had to say it) when I read Eclipse I thought ''Bella doesn't love Edward, She is a hormonal slut who only wants to get laid. When she didn't get sex from Edward she jumped into jagob arms. If I was Edward I would have let victoria kill her after what she did or least broke up.
That's why I love your story even though my heart broke for Edward. (don't listen to the haters)
Lastly I would like to say sorry for the long review. But I really hope that you read it. (and maybe reply)
| rubyred21 chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
that wasnt :(
| anou chapter 2 . 8/21/2010
hello there! :)
i just want to say to 'lord kelvin' that he has no right what so EVER to write such a review, humiliating an author who has posted her story on a free site, its her right to do write what she wants and clearly if you didn't like it you should have expressed your point of view in a more polite way. who do you think you are?
note to authou: (that's the longest speech i have ever written :) but this person has to know that its not up to him, there are other readers who like and appreciate different stoies)
there are people who like, love your style and story so don't mind someone who needs to be put in a teaching-manners class
lastly, this story is AWESOME :D
| Megan chapter 3 . 6/23/2010
when will you update these stories?
| Thorn Twilogist chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
I likey! So much pain! :D I'd be glad to make a banner, if no one else has..
| EdwardxBellaxLover chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
NOT TO BE MEAN BUT WHAT THE FUCK IS YOUR PROBLEM THIS IS NOT B*TCH BELLA AND EDAWRD. WHY DID YOU PUT IN B*TCH BELLA AND EDAWRD SECTION. WHY YOU MAKE THAT B*TCH WITH UGLY YUCKY STINKY NASTY GROSS ASSHOLEDICK JACOB DAMN IT MOVE THIS STORY OUT B*TCH BELLA AND EDWARD SECTION PLEASE. DAMN IT WASTED TIME READ THIS STUPID CRAP OF STORY.
| Werewolf String Quartet chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
I liked it! I think that Bella deserved that, with al lthe stuff thats happened in Eclipse. I dont like Bella, she should just pick one and stick with it! not go Edward! ohh, but look, theres Jacob, poor and alone..Im going to comfort him and kiss him and tell him that I love him (even if its not in that way) and then later feel guilty for cheating on Edward. Again.
Can a girl even have affiars 11 people? i mean, tiger woods had 10 girls...and his wife, but Bella isnt even counting Edward. O.o
| SkaterGirl246 chapter 2 . 1/16/2010
Very amazing story. I really do have no words. I think it was very well written, and the characters personalities were completely perfect in this cercumstance (prob spelt that wrong...). I would have loved to see some of Alice or Rosealie in here though. M fav speech was probably Esme's. It was so deep and the emotion really shined through. And YOU GO GIRL! Flamers are just cowards who think they're cool. I'd love to see Lord Kelvin say that to your face. He's just one of the many who think that because the computer screen is between them and the person they're writing to they're all that. I am totally behind you!
| Delete Account123 chapter 2 . 12/18/2009
I hope you don't mind my review, But I just want to state my point of view about your stories.
You are a good writer and you have original plots (few persons can say this about their stories), but the very big minus with your stories is that you don't continue them.
I think that right now you have about 12 stories and you are trying to update them all.
I think I saw on this site about 2 authors, very good writers, that have 3-5 posted stories, but they focus on one story and they make it very good.
My favourite fic on this site is original and has a good developed plot. I can give you the story if you want, it's a twilight fic. Maybe you'll like it :P
What I'm trying to say is that you can write such a story and I believe it would turn up to be awesome.
Have fun writing.
ps: please excuse my poor english. I'm still trying to learn this language
| Fanfiction addict 4 life 2 chapter 2 . 11/30/2009
hey love ur story can u continue it?
| MoonlightStream36 chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
THANK YOU i always see stories of edward messing up and sweet innocent bella does nothing finally she the fault i love the story wish it could continue but i love it great job
| Thats-So-Alex chapter 2 . 10/21/2009
It Was Totally Unecessary For Them To Give You That Review. But I Wouldn't Take It To Heart, (Which I Understand You Probably Didn't) They Just Had Nothing Better To Do. :)
As Long As Other People Believed Your Story Was Good, And You Believe It, Then Thats All The Matters! One Person Isn't Going To Change It. :)
I Hope None Of That Came Across As Too..Patronizing. If It Did, I'm Sorry. I Was Only Trying To Be Helpful. :)
Alex. xo. :)